I like the concept, its cool, but the execution is just plain horrible. The grammar is subpar, the story telling is not the best, to be honest, it just sounds like a summary and not the actual story. And the character himself, despite having the same background as mcu captain america, which is also debatable by the way, just sounds off everytime he talks for some reason, its like he’s trying to flex that he’s a “war hero” most of the time. He just doesn’t sound like captain America but instead a fan wearing his suit trying too hard to be him….. Overall i think the concept is good but the story itself is bad. Like you could have gone over his time in WW2 where he met Wonder Woman (im pretty sure she fought in WW2) and such and such before he got frozen in ice, there could have been a whole prologue before the actual story started! And the reactions to his return are just lacklusteer! They dont even know him so he has to introduce himself most of the time, like that bright a** shield aint a dead giveaway! And when they finally know who he is, there’s just a slight widening of the eye😂
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