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Mikemaiku
MikemaikuLv131yr
2023-04-11 06:51

I haven’t read the story but all the reviews are low star for no real reason other it’s a harem. I personally don’t like them either but that doesn’t mean it’s bad and you shouldn’t leave a bad review because of it. Unless it’s done bad and you express that instead of just saying “Harem bad I don’t like one star. So this is to help balance it out and give the author some encouragement. Hopefully the story is at least ok or I’ll sound stupid

Young Justice: The black super soldier

Tjsmith1202
2.4
46 Chs

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Mikemaiku
MikemaikuLv13

Also Arthur. How is the mc have the super soldier serum going to make the mc op. I know in the comics Captain american is a lot stronger then the mcu but compared to DC heavy hitters he is weak. A suggestion thu if you don’t wanna change his powers is to add to them. I think magic is an often overlooked part of the DC universe especially considering how almost everything is vulnerable to it. And it would work with him being a genius he could combine them and use magitek.

1yr
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yodo_
yodo_Lv1

The story is too cringe.

1yr

B0r3d_Guy_1
B0r3d_Guy_1Lv13

cool concept poor writing. Spelling, punctuation and grammer is basically non existent and makes it hard to read.

1yr
Dcelano
DcelanoLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
StromLantern
StromLanternLv5

Couldn't read past chapter one, the spelling and grammar, sentence structure, everything is just wrong with this one, give it a pass until the Author gets it edited.

1yr
SS_Ozymander
SS_OzymanderLv2

no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no

1yr
1_Am_A_New_God
1_Am_A_New_GodLv3

the writing is awful, and why is a WAR HERO on a team of teenagers instead of the Justice League 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhjh nasty harem story gross

1yr
Fuck_You_2730
Fuck_You_2730Lv1

Merda . Simplesmente isso . Nem parece que lá autor está realmente tentando , mesmo fábrica que só são escritas para passar o tempo não são tão ruins quanto essa !

1yr
AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

I like the concept, its cool, but the execution is just plain horrible. The grammar is subpar, the story telling is not the best, to be honest, it just sounds like a summary and not the actual story. And the character himself, despite having the same background as mcu captain america, which is also debatable by the way, just sounds off everytime he talks for some reason, its like he’s trying to flex that he’s a “war hero” most of the time. He just doesn’t sound like captain America but instead a fan wearing his suit trying too hard to be him….. Overall i think the concept is good but the story itself is bad. Like you could have gone over his time in WW2 where he met Wonder Woman (im pretty sure she fought in WW2) and such and such before he got frozen in ice, there could have been a whole prologue before the actual story started! And the reactions to his return are just lacklusteer! They dont even know him so he has to introduce himself most of the time, like that bright a** shield aint a dead giveaway! And when they finally know who he is, there’s just a slight widening of the eye😂

1yr
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