oof you can really see the CN dialogues here.

great translation. -1 star for not crediting the OG.

your Math is not Mathing. There should be 50 more stamina. +40 from swordmastery and another +40 for PE.

don't be shy and put into *months*, readers might not like if he grew too strong in a matter of weeks.

There should be HP increase as well since it's under Physical Endurance. (Strong) Physique might be more apt instead of Physical Endurance.

Perfect for 3rd Mizukage. A popular theory is that he's a Yuki since he kinda look like Byakuya. Yuki's are quite aesthetically pleasing compared to other clans in Kiri.

should've change to Basic Sword Proficiency instead of Sword Skill. Shimotsuki sword skills are 2^n lb cannon or Onigiri.

Toki could travel time. so it's plausible.

Great so far. We don't really see much changes from his lvl up aside from hp and stamina increase.

what happened to the attributes? his first lvl up he was rewarded by attribute pts.

she wasn't even born yet.

some good oned are dropped around 20 ch. HxH is like an untapped terittory on fanfic app, and MTLs are mostly OP MCs. My Researching Journey had some moments when it comes to expounded lore, but character interactions are a bit stale.

considering there are 3 huge farms on such a small town, don't expect any accuracy on such geographical realism on author's part. Also this is a translation, so yeah.

Quite an interesting start. -1 star for word paddingz even in DC-verse that's considered as a dick move. Hope this won't be dropped.

I think it was Momo. He friendzoned the acid girl iirc.

why Nv not Lv? is that a translation error?

My God, their his employees. He didn't need to burden himself with their future. He's 12yo ffs.

same. opening a Gym after a couple of years of farming would be a better route.

I gave this another chance and look up CP2077 infos and kinda get it on my 3rd read. I read this on Fanfiction and the chapters are long there. The writing had lots of spelling errors, but it's still above average. The story is pretty mid, I like the beginning it has more original content than the latter half. The pacing could've been improved, too slow to my taste. Some characters are quite unneccessary like the Shimotsuki, Byron and Domino. They could be gone and not much would change. Author simply added these characters to force a connection to Kaido, Laboon & Mihawk. We never get to see Bob's backstory, and Triton is stupidly expensive yet useless. He already has a Legendary Sword Satori, the unbreakable sword. Author clearly have no idea of the backstory of the swords he put on his story and randomly put an expensive CP tag on them. Updates, well it's dropped. 4-3-4-3-2............................. . This fic really don't have much of a hook. MC is a musician and battles strong people a lot yet we never got the reaction we wanted from canon characters. Readers never got that dose of serotonin from all the troubles MC dived himself into. Every time we get a sneak peek of canon characters, it's just about future problems and that just built up frustrations from readers.

ooh burn.