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QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcasticLv41yr
2023-04-10 20:53

I really do enjoy this fic, but honestly... the character progression is literally unconsciousness. Whenever something happens he loses control, by comparison he's worse than the she-hulk on her period. At least for the chapters that was out when i was writing this poor review, he needs rescuing every 5th chapter. Basically a damsel in distress all the time, not sure when that is changing, but the writing is amazing overall.

I Reap Souls In DC (Bleach X DC comics)

Saintbarbido
3.9
206 Chs

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DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

Well time to avoid this

1yr
40
BonNuit
BonNuitLv13

It stops about halfway through when he finally starts getting better with his abilities

DeathLingers:Well time to avoid this
1yr
6
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

Still not for me. I hate mcs not being in control of themselves

BonNuit:It stops about halfway through when he finally starts getting better with his abilities
1yr
29
BonNuit
BonNuitLv13

He does get in control. It’s just he doesn’t even realize what he is at first

DeathLingers:Still not for me. I hate mcs not being in control of themselves
1yr
7
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

thats good but I don't like weak to strong mcs as well and this sounds like one

BonNuit:He does get in control. It’s just he doesn’t even realize what he is at first
1yr
15
BonNuit
BonNuitLv13

Can’t fault you there

1yr
7
Eric8the4lost_
Eric8the4lost_Lv4

DeathLingers:thats good but I don't like weak to strong mcs as well and this sounds like one
1yr
17
Poet_man
Poet_manLv4

Eric8the4lost_:
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1yr
4
Eric8the4lost_
Eric8the4lost_Lv4

?

Poet_man:
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1yr
Poet_man
Poet_manLv4

Eric8the4lost_:?
1yr
4
cruelsanto
cruelsantoLv13

Lol bro is actively avoiding trying to read it

DeathLingers:thats good but I don't like weak to strong mcs as well and this sounds like one
1yr
3
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

of course I would. I've read too many weak to strong mcs and have come to hate the constant bs, where as an op mc even if some bs pops up it gets stomped

cruelsanto:Lol bro is actively avoiding trying to read it
1yr
7
cruelsanto
cruelsantoLv13

Lol you just like me bro

DeathLingers:of course I would. I've read too many weak to strong mcs and have come to hate the constant bs, where as an op mc even if some bs pops up it gets stomped
1yr
3
AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

Good night

BonNuit:Can’t fault you there
3mth
BonNuit
BonNuitLv13

Good morning

AspiringPedo:Good night
3mth
1
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv3

16d
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SuryaputraKarna
SuryaputraKarnaLv4

its going way too slow for a story that does not give readers any context about what is happening. Like reader already have read 5 chapters but still do not know the basis of the plot and what is happening and why is it happening

1yr

marcelll3214
marcelll3214Lv2

I do not like mc, not his fight with chesire, not a that author doesnt know bleach. This whole mystery you have going on is simply annoying with this type of mc. THis feels like i am reading about a victim which i do not like. Read until chapter 16.

1yr
NotSoBigShlong
NotSoBigShlongLv14

Clubky writing without any explanation to what is happening to the story at all. I’m assuming the auhtor assumes we have read the synopsis because the first chapter doesn’t give any context to anything at all. Knowing this author from his avatar fic he probably won’t explain anything in a response to this and just cry and insult the readers for not understanding his writing.

1yr
GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

I do not like mc, not his fight with chesire, not a that author doesnt know bleach. This whole mystery you have going on is simply annoying with this type of mc. THis feels like i am reading about a victim which i do not like.

1yr
creatorGod
creatorGodLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Blake_Langton
Blake_LangtonLv15

I hate this, I find it so r*tarded and the mc and setup, it’s all hella dumb. !*This is just my opinion though*!

1yr
CruddyDrummer
CruddyDrummerLv4

Author does what I call a pro gamer move for creating mystery. i.e remove 90% of the material of the story in order to create cryptic mystery. jokes aside, that's not mystery. Forcefully withholding things from the reader is not mystery, it may sound similar to being curious of the unknown of what's happening or to come but it's not mystery. The writing is a mess, and the mc spends most of his time being unconscious. The premise sounds exciting tbh, the start also was very good. But author needs to work on the plot and how it develops. Many of the chapters feel like they are missing 2-3 chapters in between. e.g - taskforce x gets attacked by Harley n friends, the chapters ends, no conclusion to the fight. the next time they appear they are all together fighting against mc in the league of assassin compound, then comes to justice league too. so there's like a chaos of fighting between the taskforce, also vs mc, also vs batman, also Batman vs mc, also justice league vs mc. yeah sounds so chaotic right. i wouldn't recommend this fic unless u have too much time.

1yr
Gamer_System
Gamer_SystemLv1

is it Harem or single heroine or no love interest

1yr
Zero_Five_7869
Zero_Five_7869Lv4

The start was great, amazing even, yet it all fell as the story progressed, the mc become a full-fledged anime like character by 150 chapters...

1yr
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