I really do enjoy this fic, but honestly... the character progression is literally unconsciousness. Whenever something happens he loses control, by comparison he's worse than the she-hulk on her period. At least for the chapters that was out when i was writing this poor review, he needs rescuing every 5th chapter. Basically a damsel in distress all the time, not sure when that is changing, but the writing is amazing overall.

its going way too slow for a story that does not give readers any context about what is happening. Like reader already have read 5 chapters but still do not know the basis of the plot and what is happening and why is it happening

I do not like mc, not his fight with chesire, not a that author doesnt know bleach. This whole mystery you have going on is simply annoying with this type of mc. THis feels like i am reading about a victim which i do not like. Read until chapter 16.

Clubky writing without any explanation to what is happening to the story at all. I’m assuming the auhtor assumes we have read the synopsis because the first chapter doesn’t give any context to anything at all. Knowing this author from his avatar fic he probably won’t explain anything in a response to this and just cry and insult the readers for not understanding his writing.

I do not like mc, not his fight with chesire, not a that author doesnt know bleach. This whole mystery you have going on is simply annoying with this type of mc. THis feels like i am reading about a victim which i do not like.

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I hate this, I find it so r*tarded and the mc and setup, it’s all hella dumb. !*This is just my opinion though*!

Author does what I call a pro gamer move for creating mystery. i.e remove 90% of the material of the story in order to create cryptic mystery. jokes aside, that's not mystery. Forcefully withholding things from the reader is not mystery, it may sound similar to being curious of the unknown of what's happening or to come but it's not mystery. The writing is a mess, and the mc spends most of his time being unconscious. The premise sounds exciting tbh, the start also was very good. But author needs to work on the plot and how it develops. Many of the chapters feel like they are missing 2-3 chapters in between. e.g - taskforce x gets attacked by Harley n friends, the chapters ends, no conclusion to the fight. the next time they appear they are all together fighting against mc in the league of assassin compound, then comes to justice league too. so there's like a chaos of fighting between the taskforce, also vs mc, also vs batman, also Batman vs mc, also justice league vs mc. yeah sounds so chaotic right. i wouldn't recommend this fic unless u have too much time.

The start was great, amazing even, yet it all fell as the story progressed, the mc become a full-fledged anime like character by 150 chapters...