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Worn_out_byLv151yr
2023-08-01 17:21

Honestly bad the character has zero development even after years he remains the same with no goal or ambition boring af. The pacing and story telling are horrendous it’s every where and the author can’t seem to remember or decide what supernatural he is or if he even is one. There is also the issue of him having no ambition he’s essentially just an insert that is just there to be a rag doll

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Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

To add the time skips leave so much out it screams I don’t know what I am doing then the author explains in the comments things that aren’t in said chapters like we’re supposed to know

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

Oh and many of these reviews are either fake from likely the author and many are more spammed as they give 5 stars to everyone basically don’t waste your time

omiguh
omiguhLv4

where did you stop at? While i wont lie about the beginning as it was pretty rough but it got better fairly quickly since the chapters go by quick. By the end of season 1, he was practically a normal boy, interacting casually with most. And that was the whole reason he went to school. To interact with people and have his character progression. He was only consistently interacting with malia who was just as mess up as him in the head.

illuzio
illuzioLv1

I don't think we read the same book. The only character devloppement is now he can say one sentence or two to boyd (suppose to be is best friend) and alison and lydia instead to ignore them.

omiguh:where did you stop at? While i wont lie about the beginning as it was pretty rough but it got better fairly quickly since the chapters go by quick. By the end of season 1, he was practically a normal boy, interacting casually with most. And that was the whole reason he went to school. To interact with people and have his character progression. He was only consistently interacting with malia who was just as mess up as him in the head.
SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

You do know that he was in a pack and could interaction with people there right? There was a whole time skip and you're going to say he "got out of his apathy"/"interacts more" because of one year/season at his new school instead of the people who took care of him for years and tried to make him open up?

omiguh:where did you stop at? While i wont lie about the beginning as it was pretty rough but it got better fairly quickly since the chapters go by quick. By the end of season 1, he was practically a normal boy, interacting casually with most. And that was the whole reason he went to school. To interact with people and have his character progression. He was only consistently interacting with malia who was just as mess up as him in the head.
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