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DaoistCheeseburger
DaoistCheeseburgerLv11yr
2023-06-21 22:47

The story is pretty familiar if you've seen the first season of the show, so nothing to really write home about there though of course being a SI/new MC there are some twists and turns as one expects with a fanfic. The writing is decent, but for Webnovel it's a five because it has complete sentences with a basic grasp of grammar. The updates appear to be regular.. The main, and really only, problem I have with this novel so far is the MC's personality. Apathy as a character trait does not work. It can work temporarily as a building block that shows character development, but as is, it seems that the author intends to keep the character apathetic the entire time. The MC only gets involved in things that very directly involve him or provoke his "bloodlust" which is just edgelord'y but I suppose isn't the worst. Anyway, unlike your standard "apathetic" cultivation MCs, he doesn't even seem to care for training, self development or face slapping. He literally seems to care about one thing and one thing only, and that's his girlfriend. I would recommend the story up to its current chapter on Webnovel (54 chapters) but if MC continues to stay apathetic, I'd say not to bother, eventually the fact that the only way MC gets roped into things is through proximity is going to get old. The fact that the author is writing a fanfic of a "teen drama series" and seems apathetic toward "teen activities" and "drama" is all you really need to know.

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MF_THE_BOTH
MF_THE_BOTHLv5

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

Thanks. Not reading about a completely unrealistic MC author made up with no consideration to what a human is.

Iberos
IberosLv4

tbh am fine with an apathetic character for once , too used to isekai characters i swear if i hear one more yuusha-sama from a blond bimbo i will kill my self .also no harems so am all for it

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