Dum! Dum!! Dum!! My second fanfiction is finally here and I have to say I'm pretty nervous about this one. The reason I chose a Teen Wolf fic to wrote is because there were absolutely none(those on Wattpad don't count) that I found, interesting, except one here on Webnovel, but unfortunately it was dropped so I have high hopes for this one. I decided to write Teen Wolf because I wanted to challenge myself and also take a break, or rather another outlook, from the one I took in Marvel: Re-do. Believe it or not, writing something as complicated as a Marvel fic is hard so kudos to all the authors who managed to make theirs a wonderful story. Now unto TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN. The starting is a little iffy as I was torn between the different scenarios that came to me when writing the first few chapters so it might seem a little bit... nor sure of the word I want to use there, but that's how it might seem. Whatever it might be, it's definitely a unique start, one of its kind. I assure you. I'm not going to give too many spoilers about it so you'll just have to make your own impressions. Romance? Of course. Though this one will be way different than what I tried to portray in Marvel. Main love interest is Malia... I just love that girl. She's the very picture of my ideal girlfriend so don't judge. The only thing I'll say is that they both meet quite early on, way earlier than she waS introduced in the series...and I mean WAY earlier. As for MC, this is where it gets a little bit interesting. The situation about the MC's beginning in reference to the starting of the novel is quite interesting so his situation overall follows the same route. As for what he is... He's a vampire. Or at least one of the many types portrayed in media. Like everyone knows, a vampire in Teen Wolf is overkill so I'll have to bring him down to their level, like way down. His vampirism is a cross between Twilight's and The Vampire Diaries', in the sense that he doesn't burn in the sun and does not glow either. He has the normal weakness to vampires, also news one based on Teen Wolf's myths and also the urge which impacts his character in most ways. In essence, he would be quite similar to a Wendigo for those familiar with Teen Wolf's supernaturals. That's all I can say, so please look forward to it.

The story is pretty familiar if you've seen the first season of the show, so nothing to really write home about there though of course being a SI/new MC there are some twists and turns as one expects with a fanfic. The writing is decent, but for Webnovel it's a five because it has complete sentences with a basic grasp of grammar. The updates appear to be regular.. The main, and really only, problem I have with this novel so far is the MC's personality. Apathy as a character trait does not work. It can work temporarily as a building block that shows character development, but as is, it seems that the author intends to keep the character apathetic the entire time. The MC only gets involved in things that very directly involve him or provoke his "bloodlust" which is just edgelord'y but I suppose isn't the worst. Anyway, unlike your standard "apathetic" cultivation MCs, he doesn't even seem to care for training, self development or face slapping. He literally seems to care about one thing and one thing only, and that's his girlfriend. I would recommend the story up to its current chapter on Webnovel (54 chapters) but if MC continues to stay apathetic, I'd say not to bother, eventually the fact that the only way MC gets roped into things is through proximity is going to get old. The fact that the author is writing a fanfic of a "teen drama series" and seems apathetic toward "teen activities" and "drama" is all you really need to know.

Honestly bad the character has zero development even after years he remains the same with no goal or ambition boring af. The pacing and story telling are horrendous it’s every where and the author can’t seem to remember or decide what supernatural he is or if he even is one. There is also the issue of him having no ambition he’s essentially just an insert that is just there to be a rag doll

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First review besides the author! Well, if I know this author, I have high expectations for this fic. I'm something of a Teen Wolf fic writer myself (Looks at my AO3 with 55 fics of Teen Wolf, mainly Sterek cause i got a little bit obsessed with the ship)

Author don't drop the fic. I'm currently binge watching teen wolf, so would love some quality fic on the go. Would like it to reach atleast season 4. You know see the same scenes from a different perspective. Btw you're doing a great job with the fic. So again don't drop. 🙂

Although the beginning was confusing, it turned out quite well. That cannot be said about the last chapters so far. If in the beginning it was pity for the main character and because of this kind of drama it was interesting to read, then everything goes downhill. The character of the protagonist is so bad, I didn't like his thoughts at all. This is my opinion as a reader and it may not coincide with others. Liked the chemistry between Malia and the main character. That's basically it.

the story gets better the more you read, trust. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

A vampire was already enough to eanr you a five star. The story was enough to enough you more.. .but sadly this the most I can give

I woud give more but i have to see how mc reacts in conflict and interacts with other people. If he is a p* as you are making him out to be then i would give less. But if you exagerated and mc retaliates then i will give five. Otherwise very well writen. I especialy like the relationship you made with Malia. It has everything i ever wanted from it.