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2024-07-20 20:45

I really like the premise of the story, but the characters are just really bad. ALL the girls are just potential members of mcs half-hearted harem. The guys are a lot more interesting, except the mc. Daniel (the mc) is really indecisive and has no actual goal except a vague promise he gave to michaela of "building a sanctuary for the oppressed" which isn't the focus of the story at all. The story essentially just revolves around Daniel getting harassed by the hightower, Daniel fights the high tower off with absolutely no problem but doesn't really retaliate for whatever reasons (indecisive) and emboldened by Daniels inaction the hightower comes back for more. Rinse and repeat. Daniel is also pretty stupid. The author tries to make him look like he's smart, but he really just isn't. A lot of his decisions are just... weak. I guess he has to act this way because the author made the mc just too strong, so the only way to create some tension is to have Daniel just not use his power against the hightower. (the big bad organisation) And what is his explanation for not unleashing his overwhelming might against this objectively evil genocidal organisation? Because he SIMPS for an incompetent woman who is against violence. EVEN THOUGH this organisation has tried and succeeded in causing significant harm to his loved ones MULTIPLE TIMES and he STILL doesn't fight back. Btw, he also has no problems flirting with a woman who openly supports slavery. Its infuriating, really.

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RavenClaw471
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Thank you for your opinion. When reading from your review it's look like he's quite a Simp himself. may I inquire you are reading until which chapter?

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