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nerdSupreme14
nerdSupreme14Lv151yr
2023-04-17 13:55

The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.

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RavenClaw471
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Out of curiosity, which chapter did you find the most challenging to read?

SPVietBoy_4424
SPVietBoy_4424Lv4

Agreed. I personally had to stop a few chapters in. The swap between present tense and past tense was very jarring, especially mid sentence or mid paragraph. Lots of tell, and less show in the story, which made it a bit more unappealing to read

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