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Dao_Of_Sauce
Dao_Of_SauceLv141yr
2023-06-12 08:49

I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading. If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken. Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them. To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.

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RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

Excuse me, May I ask in which chapter that you're stop reading? Spoiler Because I aim to create some mystery about the source of his power and then reveal it later. And I assure you, It's not what you understand.

jordiscus
jordiscusLv14

The synopsis never said anything about the MC owning a shop. Yes, he created his own card game, but I was never led to believe he would own a shop. The MC does have to buy cards from a mysterious shop that only he can enter, and he can only open the packs at the shop. But beyond that, he can actualize them anywhere he wants, not only the shop.I can only assume that some higher being resurrected MC and gave the ability to use his cards in real life. As far as I'm concerned, the synopsis is generally on point. Well, not all of it, but we're only so far into the story.

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

The synopsis and the title say it xD

jordiscus:The synopsis never said anything about the MC owning a shop. Yes, he created his own card game, but I was never led to believe he would own a shop. The MC does have to buy cards from a mysterious shop that only he can enter, and he can only open the packs at the shop. But beyond that, he can actualize them anywhere he wants, not only the shop.I can only assume that some higher being resurrected MC and gave the ability to use his cards in real life. As far as I'm concerned, the synopsis is generally on point. Well, not all of it, but we're only so far into the story.
DarkD
DarkDLv14

Weak criticism for a 2-star review. It's arguable weather that's even criticism. Although it might be good for the author to have a terrible negative review on the front of his reviews page. Proves he's not one of the people deleting reviews to bump his score.

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