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RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author1yr
2023-04-16 17:22

Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)

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Thiago_Ferreira_6770
Thiago_Ferreira_6770Lv1

Is there yuri inside the harem?

RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

No

Thiago_Ferreira_6770:Is there yuri inside the harem?
Dimdabb60
Dimdabb60Lv14

seriously mc turned out a simp.

RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

He said he's not. If you trust him.

Dimdabb60:seriously mc turned out a simp.
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

I haven't read too much (ch15 I think), I just wanted to know if the romace/har*m will be from the start? I hope we don't wait too long for him to recognize Wrath.

RavenClaw471:No
RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

About chapter 50+ there will be some mentioning about Wrath. Also, I don't want to write the mindless harem that any girl who met with protagonist would automatically fall head over heel. There is a build up period but it will not be too long like 100+ chapter like some Xianxia novel. Please stay tune

FallenAngeI:I haven't read too much (ch15 I think), I just wanted to know if the romace/har*m will be from the start? I hope we don't wait too long for him to recognize Wrath.
Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

the synopsis is horrible

MK_Infinity
MK_InfinityLv14

actualize permanently or the card just have a timer?

RavenClaw471
RavenClaw471Author

You can find out in the free chapter[img=recommend]

ZARIUS
ZARIUSLv4

Will he get back with his gf somehow?

RavenClaw471:You can find out in the free chapter[img=recommend]
GodOfYandere
GodOfYandereLv3

Yandere?

readers_worst_foe
readers_worst_foeLv4

yes

ZARIUS:Will he get back with his gf somehow?
ZARIUS
ZARIUSLv4

readers_worst_foe:yes
atlm
atlmLv5

BR?

TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

The very title of your story is grammatically incorrect, so that leads me to ponder over the quality of the story itself.

Someone_Or_Other
Someone_Or_OtherLv15

It’s pretty bad until he starts editing with ChatGPT. Then it reads like it has no soul. So, still pretty bad, but differently so.

TheSlumberingWolf:The very title of your story is grammatically incorrect, so that leads me to ponder over the quality of the story itself.
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