jordiscus

This is so bad. Imagine not caring about the IP you made a fic of.

At the beginning of dbz, Nappa is about 50 years old. Vegeta is 30 years old. The timeline doesn't match up.

It isn't that simple. The President of Elkara refused to hand over trigger from the attack, which could be used to make a "vaccine." Though it's true he didn't need to kill the man.

Even if he doesn't, which he does, it would make her like him more. Which is always a good thing.

Not everybody has access to magic. His inventions will help everyone.

Does that mean you could random trees or a bunch of grass light up? What about dust mites? Honestly would be annoying to see all the time

He doesn't want to interrupt their business while they're away. When they get back, they'll find out

Dude messed up. He should have said, "I made it to make your job easier. I don't want to see you hurt yourself."

Plumbing can benefit every person, especially those without magic. After plumping becomes widespread, it will significantly improve the lives of everyone on the planet.

Yes. The MC is weak-willed and folds with close to no pressure.