Item: Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)
Rating: 4.6
Author: LordSatan666

LordSatan666Lv141yr

2023-05-21 05:06

this was an amazing story all the way up to chapter 16 and then author did an unforgivable not maximizing mc character growth and potential and there isn't any significant reason or reward for doing so it was spontaneous and seemed so rushed now it is redeemable by rewriting the end of chapter 16 forgoing level up to maximize potential but otherwise after chap 16 so far I have lost interest in this story

Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)

Vulkizaro_Zoromi

4.4

146 Chs

Liked by 16 people

Replies6

Vulkizaro_ZoromiAuthor

he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?

1yr

Chaos_Order8Lv5

Iam interested in way did u add level 0 When someone gets a God bless He becomes level 1 with 0 state but the mc has this 0 level . I looked into fandom and I didn't find about this at all so? Did u add this by yourself

Vulkizaro_Zoromi:he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?

1yr

ywhy4_Lv4

does this fic has romance?

Vulkizaro_Zoromi:he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?

1yr

Azathoth2Lv4

harem ? hope not

Vulkizaro_Zoromi:he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?

1yr

demon_EaterLv14

Where is the Amazon twins

1yr

Siege_JayLv12

ais main

ywhy4_:does this fic has romance?

1yr

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