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LordSatan666
LordSatan666Lv141yr
2023-05-21 05:06

this was an amazing story all the way up to chapter 16 and then author did an unforgivable not maximizing mc character growth and potential and there isn't any significant reason or reward for doing so it was spontaneous and seemed so rushed now it is redeemable by rewriting the end of chapter 16 forgoing level up to maximize potential but otherwise after chap 16 so far I have lost interest in this story

Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)

Vulkizaro_Zoromi
4.3
146 Chs

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Vulkizaro_Zoromi
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he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?

1yr
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Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

Iam interested in way did u add level 0 When someone gets a God bless He becomes level 1 with 0 state but the mc has this 0 level . I looked into fandom and I didn't find about this at all so? Did u add this by yourself

Vulkizaro_Zoromi:he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?
1yr
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ywhy4_
ywhy4_Lv4

does this fic has romance?

Vulkizaro_Zoromi:he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?
1yr
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv4

harem ? hope not

Vulkizaro_Zoromi:he is actually going to make up for this later on in the story. it just hasn't been released yet. you really someone of Lyze's character is going to allow Loki to do that and he's not going to deal with it?
1yr
demon_Eater
demon_EaterLv14

Where is the Amazon twins

1yr
Siege_Jay
Siege_JayLv13

ais main

ywhy4_:does this fic has romance?
1yr
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Cleiton_Sena_6677
Cleiton_Sena_6677Lv1

The story idea in my opinion is pretty average, the execution is pretty boring, the MC is basically a slave to a superior being and bows to the strong which I find very uninteresting to read (Google Translator)

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redgrave
redgraveLv4

Bro its an interesting plot but the past 5 ch have been them going on a shopping trip. nothing is happening and all the dialogue in these chaps have been a whole slew of lots of words with no substance.

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Goldenstar142
Goldenstar142Lv1

Ok honestly story so far is kinda average maybe because it doesn't really speak to me it's not bad except for the stupid things mc does at the beginning Honestly thing that bothers me the most is the it's not harem in a Harem world i have rule is that if it's a harem world like dxd to love ru danmchi etc etc story must follow the trop and if it's not don't have one only except if it's necessary otherwise it's just weird

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NikTB
NikTBLv14

Just so people are aware because clearly the author doesn’t want you to know until you’ve spent HOURS getting halfway through the story. THIS IS A HAREM STORY. So if you have any good taste and rightfully think harem is gross and ruins every story then steer clear of reading this. If this didn’t have a harem in it then it would have been one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here. But sadly the authors Patrons made a vote to make this harem.

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Majeh7
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This is a great novel keep up the great work.........................................................................................................

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CelestrialHJ
CelestrialHJLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Rock_Drake
Rock_DrakeLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Lyle_Herbst
Lyle_HerbstLv4

HOW IS THIS BOOK NOT NUMBER 1? Seriously, people vote and use your power stones. The book is amazing, and the development of the dis" If dis was original Danmachi. It would be with the likes of Naruto and all the other big anime

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jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

Vulkizaro_Zoromi Great Fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Seven Deadly Sins fanfic idea immediately after Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story) Reborn as a Saiyan in Seven Deadly Sins A soul has been reborn into Sds as a Full-Blooded Saiyan. What will he do now? Shows : Seven Deadly Sins and SDS: Four Knights of the Apocalypse Harem Sennett Jericho Guila Veronica Liones Jillian Vivian Margaret Liones Merlin Derieri Matrona Jenna Deldry Nerobasta Jelamet Gjalga Greib Sabunak Roxy Freyja Skadi Dolores Isolde

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