I really like the concept of the fic it's good that he is trying so hard to go back but after his fight with ottar and he realises that he needs to take things slowly and with efficiency, I think that now that he starting to become more stable mentally and emotionally it would be good that he stats treating this world as his for the time begin and try to change and plan ahead as he has meta verse knowledge like for example he already helped lily but there is still the 7 day nightmare of orario so he could start to prepare for that and make allies such as the asterea family and saving shakshi little sister so as to gain favours and create his own set of network since he himself don't know for how long he will be in it. In any case this fic is really great and we can see that the author has the way to describe battle accordingly, emotional development of both the mc and side characters and the story development is at a good paste, so all in all it a really great fic an with consistency of chp per week hope u keep it up author cause I know where my power stone are going 😀.
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