LordSatan666

the writing is really well done but the growth is painfully slow also another thing is determining what core type your making the mc or if your gonna give mc a adaptive core which grows while straining it which would help with stat growth

superman is being reflected pretty well for a teen not only that but someone goes through growth to reach that point and isn't immediately the man of steel you are making a more realistic superman that has real issues and learns to solve them and whatnot. take your time but I actually like his current growth

like there's no disrespect but it needs a rewrite to be better like premise is cool izuku with speed force cause he definitely would use it better than alot of speedsters plus material science is more advanced in mha so momo could make materials that would be perfect for speedster until he learned how to make speedforce constructs

there are a couple of glaring issues that can be fixed one in the beginning if you use a character with a truth detector quirk they would determine izukus dad not to have done the crime so you should have both parents killed otherwise that's just a big plot hole which would require rewriting some of this but the more you write using broken logic in the story the more you would need to change for the edited version should you write one

honestly I'd prefer every other day uploads to help prevent burnout and give a potential for some chapter stockpiling

hotel transylvaniahelsing anime or van helsing the movie with Hugh Jackman honestly the Hugh Jackman one would be interesting but it's likely the anime but the hotel transylvania would be comedic and set up for alot of interesting developments

so far so good but one thing is some ghost riders can use wings to fly In a couple versions I've seen most utilize vehicles to stay with the times but ghost riders look pretty much like angels of death with wings

mc does but just because they have the mana doesn't mean they are spamming it every second which would be cool fire bolt rapid fire

and the corrections to some of the Asian phrases needs to be adjusted since it's written in a mtl format