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redgraveLv41yr
2023-06-27 14:57

Bro its an interesting plot but the past 5 ch have been them going on a shopping trip. nothing is happening and all the dialogue in these chaps have been a whole slew of lots of words with no substance.

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I recently started finding lots of stories like what you're saying. And ALL of them has AI or some type of chat/corrector fell to their wording. And the worse is that crutch only makes lazy authors, that don't put a little bit of effort to make their SKILLS -aka writing better.

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