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Vishvarupam
VishvarupamLv21yr
2023-02-25 10:04

I was little confused at character's speech but the rest is fine. How about adding things like secret societies who were trying to find ways of reincarnation? They would further expand the worldbuilding by adding new and secret locations time to time.

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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

A lot of things would end up appearing and secret organizations with nefarious goals is one of them.

DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

I come to ask if there is Yuri inside the harem?

Sphire1707:A lot of things would end up appearing and secret organizations with nefarious goals is one of them.
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

Hmmmm... not confirmed...🤔

DruggedCookie:I come to ask if there is Yuri inside the harem?
DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

Well, I don't know whether to continue, it's not to my taste but well, when you have it clear I'll see if yes or no

Sphire1707:Hmmmm... not confirmed...🤔
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