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Bored_Author
Bored_AuthorLv111yr
2023-02-10 00:25

First of all, as a fan of the comedy genre, I would like to say it is GOLD. There were hardly any grammar mistakes and the way that author presented the story is very intriguing. I don't know about the stability of updates as it still have only 5 chapters but the novel sure is going to my library, If there is one think that I wish for the author to correct, please don't add the author's thoughts in the middle of the story. Although it may sound funny, it will break the concentration and immersion of readers in the story. Other than that, I don't think there is anything to point out, just keep updating regularly and you will be there one day.

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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

It's a one time thing... I'd only do it during the first chapter

Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

How many in the harem

Sphire1707:It's a one time thing... I'd only do it during the first chapter
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

still not sure... 🤔

Romance_guy:How many in the harem
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

I hope it’ not more than 5😮‍💨

Sphire1707:still not sure... 🤔
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

The webnovel law of harem states...

Romance_guy:I hope it’ not more than 5😮‍💨
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

States ………..

Sphire1707:The webnovel law of harem states...
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

I don't know, you'll have to ask the pros😅😅😅. but the fact remains that I'll do my best to give life to the story and create good characters for the harem members. And the final number of the Harem is still beyond me as of this moment... there's still a lot of things bound to happen that I haven't even thought of yet.(really tempted to drop a spoiler RN, but I'll hold on to my words)

Romance_guy:States ………..
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Yesss Drop a small spoiler 👁️👁️

Sphire1707:I don't know, you'll have to ask the pros😅😅😅. but the fact remains that I'll do my best to give life to the story and create good characters for the harem members. And the final number of the Harem is still beyond me as of this moment... there's still a lot of things bound to happen that I haven't even thought of yet.(really tempted to drop a spoiler RN, but I'll hold on to my words)
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

No spoilers... unless you can bribe me👁👁👁👁

Romance_guy:Yesss Drop a small spoiler 👁️👁️
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Sphire1707:No spoilers... unless you can bribe me👁👁👁👁
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

Romance_guy:
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Wilder6
Wilder6Lv15

I plan to start reading, but I don’t like anything to depressing or sad, so if the mc’s mom or sibling die, lmk so I can be prepared. If the sad part is to someone other that the mc, I would be a lot better with that.

Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

you could add many waifus but what matters the most is the uniqueness of each harem members and how the author would do that with a good character development. .. and never forget the love interests like other authors do. ..

Sphire1707:I don't know, you'll have to ask the pros😅😅😅. but the fact remains that I'll do my best to give life to the story and create good characters for the harem members. And the final number of the Harem is still beyond me as of this moment... there's still a lot of things bound to happen that I haven't even thought of yet.(really tempted to drop a spoiler RN, but I'll hold on to my words)
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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

I am working on the uniqueness part...[img=strong]

Vince_Gregorie:you could add many waifus but what matters the most is the uniqueness of each harem members and how the author would do that with a good character development. .. and never forget the love interests like other authors do. ..
Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

Cough..Cough .. I still want a Big Harem, Cough..

Sphire1707:I am working on the uniqueness part...[img=strong]
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Author

cough... cough... I'm giving you a ... big harem... cough.. cough😂

Vince_Gregorie:Cough..Cough .. I still want a Big Harem, Cough..
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Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

Then I thank you Master Author.

Sphire1707:cough... cough... I'm giving you a ... big harem... cough.. cough😂
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