First of all, as a fan of the comedy genre, I would like to say it is GOLD. There were hardly any grammar mistakes and the way that author presented the story is very intriguing. I don't know about the stability of updates as it still have only 5 chapters but the novel sure is going to my library, If there is one think that I wish for the author to correct, please don't add the author's thoughts in the middle of the story. Although it may sound funny, it will break the concentration and immersion of readers in the story. Other than that, I don't think there is anything to point out, just keep updating regularly and you will be there one day.
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LIKEI don't know, you'll have to ask the pros😅😅😅. but the fact remains that I'll do my best to give life to the story and create good characters for the harem members. And the final number of the Harem is still beyond me as of this moment... there's still a lot of things bound to happen that I haven't even thought of yet.(really tempted to drop a spoiler RN, but I'll hold on to my words)
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Yesss Drop a small spoiler 👁️👁️
Sphire1707:I don't know, you'll have to ask the pros😅😅😅. but the fact remains that I'll do my best to give life to the story and create good characters for the harem members. And the final number of the Harem is still beyond me as of this moment... there's still a lot of things bound to happen that I haven't even thought of yet.(really tempted to drop a spoiler RN, but I'll hold on to my words)image
you could add many waifus but what matters the most is the uniqueness of each harem members and how the author would do that with a good character development. .. and never forget the love interests like other authors do. ..
Sphire1707:I don't know, you'll have to ask the pros😅😅😅. but the fact remains that I'll do my best to give life to the story and create good characters for the harem members. And the final number of the Harem is still beyond me as of this moment... there's still a lot of things bound to happen that I haven't even thought of yet.(really tempted to drop a spoiler RN, but I'll hold on to my words)image