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I recommend this novel to all the Overlord readers a chance. The characters are well thought and despite using various OCs, the immersion is so good that one would call it a spin-off of the original Overlord story.
Undeads supposed to have infinite stamina as they are already dead creatures.
Okay, the story was good. I was thinking to pit my story on hiatus for sometimes. I need more time and motivation to write.
A temporal attack that represented the shift of magic?
Montu must have a undead slave sight skill. That skill will let him see the scenes that his undeads can see.
Sounds good that they can communicate now. But have you ever heard of bonus XP? I hope you add this in his system, so he can kill two or more mobs with a single strike and level up. Dresh must summon stronger skeletons, like level 3 or 2, they will provide even more XP to them.
Okay, is there an artifact that can severe or transfer the authority of an item from one person to another?
I fixed it up
Still no power stones on my story. May I should abandon it?
So he has lost his own powers, I assume?