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Ducman
DucmanLv41yr
2024-04-13 14:14

Second review: Waiting for updates on this novel as absolutely not worth it. You wait for a week for author to release a chapter that is smaller than a per/day novel chapter like Shadow Slave with a story not going anywhere. Some chapter are just character looking at each other, imagine waiting for a week for a chapter where people just look at each-other. I am only here to see how things with Mary concludes the only interesting plot line. The moment that happens I will adios this novel forever

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Satan03
Satan03Author

I am really sorry that you felt this way about the recent chapters and storyline of the novel, I myself admit to the fact that the updates have been scarce and next to nothing for the past two months and I am deeply sorry for that. I'll try my best to make sure that your third review makes it to 4-5 stars for NMPV as I'll get better and improve myself while working on the story too. I am sorry 😞 I'll try my best

Ducman
DucmanLv4

Hey thanks for the reply, I was kinda rude in my review probably because of sour mood I had on that day. Anyways, I hope the updates are a bit more regular like 3-4 days gap

Satan03:I am really sorry that you felt this way about the recent chapters and storyline of the novel, I myself admit to the fact that the updates have been scarce and next to nothing for the past two months and I am deeply sorry for that. I'll try my best to make sure that your third review makes it to 4-5 stars for NMPV as I'll get better and improve myself while working on the story too. I am sorry 😞 I'll try my best
_ZEPHYR_
_ZEPHYR_Lv13

author why update is so slow ur busy on something or u are thinking of dropping it??

Satan03:I am really sorry that you felt this way about the recent chapters and storyline of the novel, I myself admit to the fact that the updates have been scarce and next to nothing for the past two months and I am deeply sorry for that. I'll try my best to make sure that your third review makes it to 4-5 stars for NMPV as I'll get better and improve myself while working on the story too. I am sorry 😞 I'll try my best
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AAA_legendLv13

In simple terms, this is a GREAT NOVEL, and needs more recognition.Now let's ddep dive...Pros:The world-building is pretty spot-on – not too complicated, not too simple.I love the MC's personality unpredictable yet intriguing.Side characters are well-fleshed out.I didn't spot any grammatical mistakes.The pacing is Just right!Cons:Occasionally, the descriptions of scenes are excessively lengthy.In very few cases MC's decisions/actions seem confusing and sudden(**spoiler **like how he killed Freya and the prostitute and Tiga) although that seems to be part of his personality but I hope they make sense down the line.My expectations:Mary, second most explored side character in terms of screen time, needs significant character development. The current Ren couldn't care less about the pain she caused the previous Ren. She's basically worth zilch to him as long as she's not in his way. Currently, she's just a hypocritical and narrow-minded character. But, if her character stays the same till the end, it's gonna feel like a waste of time. She'll end up as a brain-dead character not worth the time invested. Let's hope that doesn't happen! Her character arc should logically conclude, regardless of her eventual romantic choices.Whether this novel goes harem or not, it's cool either way. But every girl involved should get some solid character development, showing off what makes them unique and strong. Ren's relationships shouldn't just be for show.That's all for now...Great work author and ... DON'T DARE DROP

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