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Ophidian_01
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2023-04-20 02:56

just dont drop it has everything i want so plz dont drop i recommend everyone to read it once or give it a try i am sure it wouldnt dissapoint you .....................................................................................................................................................

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Ophidian_01
Ophidian_01Lv4

Nuon, bro whhy did you drop your novel. It was good??????????????

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Sahid_0016
Sahid_0016Lv3

I like this novel but the chapters updates r really poor. . it making me loose my interest in this novel

April_Damian_9478
April_Damian_9478Lv3

is there romance involved in this novel ?

Nishik_Kum
Nishik_KumLv3

This novel would have been really popular if the author updated the new chapter regularly.. loosing my interest bcuz the ch update is really a mess

Dark_Shadow_4384
Dark_Shadow_4384Lv3

What? The author dropped it? Why? This was one of my favourite novels. I thought he had a contract made for this novel. So why did he drop it?

Ophidian_01:Nuon, bro whhy did you drop your novel. It was good??????????????
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AAA_legend
AAA_legendLv13

In simple terms, this is a GREAT NOVEL, and needs more recognition.Now let's ddep dive...Pros:The world-building is pretty spot-on – not too complicated, not too simple.I love the MC's personality unpredictable yet intriguing.Side characters are well-fleshed out.I didn't spot any grammatical mistakes.The pacing is Just right!Cons:Occasionally, the descriptions of scenes are excessively lengthy.In very few cases MC's decisions/actions seem confusing and sudden(**spoiler **like how he killed Freya and the prostitute and Tiga) although that seems to be part of his personality but I hope they make sense down the line.My expectations:Mary, second most explored side character in terms of screen time, needs significant character development. The current Ren couldn't care less about the pain she caused the previous Ren. She's basically worth zilch to him as long as she's not in his way. Currently, she's just a hypocritical and narrow-minded character. But, if her character stays the same till the end, it's gonna feel like a waste of time. She'll end up as a brain-dead character not worth the time invested. Let's hope that doesn't happen! Her character arc should logically conclude, regardless of her eventual romantic choices.Whether this novel goes harem or not, it's cool either way. But every girl involved should get some solid character development, showing off what makes them unique and strong. Ren's relationships shouldn't just be for show.That's all for now...Great work author and ... DON'T DARE DROP

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