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andrewscooby
andrewscoobyLv11yr
2023-05-21 08:23

Just a tip to the author. If you lock the chapters super early, no one will pay because no one will be invested in the characters. It also makes people not want to support your work because you make it seem like the only reason you write is for money.

No More Pain For This Villain.

Satan03
4.4
380 Chs

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Satan03
Satan03Author

Yep, you are right but the problem is that I was pretty careless about it because I was new to the webnovels system so I accidentally locked the chapters too early and now due to their policies I cannot change the chapter from where I've locked them. it's my mistake and I regret it from the bottom of my heart 😭. and thank you for the review, I hope you like this novel.

1yr
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Sonu_Siraj_5546
Sonu_Siraj_5546Lv13

single fl or harem author?

Satan03:Yep, you are right but the problem is that I was pretty careless about it because I was new to the webnovels system so I accidentally locked the chapters too early and now due to their policies I cannot change the chapter from where I've locked them. it's my mistake and I regret it from the bottom of my heart 😭. and thank you for the review, I hope you like this novel.
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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

Very very naive review. There are very few people who would wake up and go to their job for no money. The fact that you believe that authors for some reason have to be inlove with what they do is disingenuous. Some people are good at things they don’t like or don’t care about.

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