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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv42yr
2023-02-24 01:19

There are only two chapters, but the story so far is great.I'm glad it's not a harem.I hope you can write more chapters..............I may update this post after reading more chapters.

Fate/Disturbance

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4.8
65 Chs

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Pausevlim
PausevlimLv3

Bro I thought you liked harems?!

2yr
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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

My ideas change quite a lot during the day.Actually, I don't have a problem if authors can write a proper harem, but most authors can't do it.

Pausevlim:Bro I thought you liked harems?!
2yr
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SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

Enough said comrade. It it's one well well approve but if it's not then we'll want a single love interest romance. Better to have one that's great than a lot that's not.

ArdaPendragon:My ideas change quite a lot during the day.Actually, I don't have a problem if authors can write a proper harem, but most authors can't do it.
2yr
22
ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

SkyNeves:Enough said comrade. It it's one well well approve but if it's not then we'll want a single love interest romance. Better to have one that's great than a lot that's not.
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2yr
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ACON
ACONLv1

Fleshed out relationships for the win!

2yr
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Skaviouz
SkaviouzLv14

What if you collect multiple Artorias and even the trap Arthur too? That should only count as one and therefore not a harem. Oh! And Mordred is a homunculus clone of Artoria, so still not a harem.

2yr
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Dragonised101
Dragonised101Lv14

unless their a hive mind it's not one person as they all have different personalities and memories

Skaviouz:What if you collect multiple Artorias and even the trap Arthur too? That should only count as one and therefore not a harem. Oh! And Mordred is a homunculus clone of Artoria, so still not a harem.
2yr
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Skaviouz
SkaviouzLv14

I thought about it again, you're right, and I can imagine, if I was someone in that predicament where my other wanted multiple versions of myself to "collect", while I wouldn't feel offset about it at first, it would make me feel under appreciated and only wanted for superficial reasons and not personal connection or commitment; I would want them to renew or make an updated commitment so we can work together.

Dragonised101:unless their a hive mind it's not one person as they all have different personalities and memories
2yr
4
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

Exactly, reminds me with good harem novel like Spirit cultivation, I think. It's hard to come by one like that.

ArdaPendragon:My ideas change quite a lot during the day.Actually, I don't have a problem if authors can write a proper harem, but most authors can't do it.
2yr
1
General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3

True

Skaviouz:I thought about it again, you're right, and I can imagine, if I was someone in that predicament where my other wanted multiple versions of myself to "collect", while I wouldn't feel offset about it at first, it would make me feel under appreciated and only wanted for superficial reasons and not personal connection or commitment; I would want them to renew or make an updated commitment so we can work together.
2yr
1
Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv4

the way this is developing ,I'm sure it ends in a harem.

Pausevlim:Bro I thought you liked harems?!
2yr
1
4DXOZ_VE
4DXOZ_VELv4

hi I have a story reborn in fate stay night as kiana so how the story be like

1yr
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xPonGx
xPonGxLv14

Ñ PPP Ip

ArdaPendragon:My ideas change quite a lot during the day.Actually, I don't have a problem if authors can write a proper harem, but most authors can't do it.
1yr
JustHavinFunReadin
JustHavinFunReadinLv12

Where? Did you delete it?

4DXOZ_VE:hi I have a story reborn in fate stay night as kiana so how the story be like
1yr
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NotSoBigShlong
NotSoBigShlongLv14

Definitely what I’v wanted to see from a Fate fanfic. None of the annoying reborn as a dumb magus and being an edge-lord infront of Gilgamesh and gathering a platoon of women servants for no reason at all ((we know the one I’m on about) though the women problem is still potentially there, hope to God it won’t) The writing is really good and doesn’t skip details to move on to what the author is trying to speed on to. They definitely use their words wisely, not wasting a paragraph to fill space. Super expectant for this one because it’s tthe type of fate book I’ve een waiting for. A Servant MC. Also, I hope the author doesn’t decide to make a mess of there being multiple of him in different timelines. Just do it. Don’t do the, ”there’s only one of you in all of time” rubbish. It’s not like he’s gonna cause any harm to anything; from what I have seen the MC is a righteous character who has a sense of right and wrong. Even if he goes through with what Astoria thought is a morally wrong situation, he also thinks that, proving he isn’t a mindless drone.

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Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

Great story, but there are very few chapters at the moment----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Godlancelot
GodlancelotLv4

Another fate fanfic Hope the author doesn't drop this or else..,.................... ..........................................................,................................

2yr
Kingu_Lugal
Kingu_LugalLv12

This is amazing! Aston is a well-written character that feels real. Though I am curious if Aston will end up with Artoria. I hope so, at least I hope they are not enemies. Also, what is the update schedule gonna look like?

2yr
Feniurme
FeniurmeLv4

An incredible read with a premise that got my attention instantaneously. I hope you have a good day author because you have certainly made mine brighter with your enjoyable story.

2yr
VoidPriestess
VoidPriestessLv14

the problem I have with a lot of FF is that they feel empty yet this FF feels alive, making me feel as I'm there experiencing whats happening in person.

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4rthr77
4rthr77Lv2

finally a good non-harem fic with character development and a ship LETS F GO!!!

2yr
wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14

Only few chapters yet already top 10 Wow 😳

2yr
Sir_Frog
Sir_FrogLv1

The story is very well written, considering that it is a Fate story. The MC, Aston, is a complex, yet simple main character. You understand his reason for doing things. He's powerfull, but not OP.

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