Definitely what I’v wanted to see from a Fate fanfic. None of the annoying reborn as a dumb magus and being an edge-lord infront of Gilgamesh and gathering a platoon of women servants for no reason at all ((we know the one I’m on about) though the women problem is still potentially there, hope to God it won’t) The writing is really good and doesn’t skip details to move on to what the author is trying to speed on to. They definitely use their words wisely, not wasting a paragraph to fill space. Super expectant for this one because it’s tthe type of fate book I’ve een waiting for. A Servant MC. Also, I hope the author doesn’t decide to make a mess of there being multiple of him in different timelines. Just do it. Don’t do the, ”there’s only one of you in all of time” rubbish. It’s not like he’s gonna cause any harm to anything; from what I have seen the MC is a righteous character who has a sense of right and wrong. Even if he goes through with what Astoria thought is a morally wrong situation, he also thinks that, proving he isn’t a mindless drone.
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read Fate as an alchemist it's peak fanfic
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Mind elaborating? I come bearing grudges born of time wasted on dumpster fires.
Akros_Zero:😐😑
the author is here😂
Akros_Zero:😐😑
Did you read mine?
Bleap:Mind elaborating? I come bearing grudges born of time wasted on dumpster fires.
Your what?
Akros_Zero:Did you read mine?
My fanfic?
Bleap:Your what?
You have one?
Akros_Zero:My fanfic?
Bruh, then why did you ask me that 'elaborate me' question in first place? Anyway just ignore my comments, I will give a review later on.
Bleap:You have one?
I was just curious about your reply.
Akros_Zero:Bruh, then why did you ask me that 'elaborate me' question in first place? Anyway just ignore my comments, I will give a review later on.
Yeah I'd be embarrassed too if I was you.
Akros_Zero:Bruh, then why did you ask me that 'elaborate me' question in first place? Anyway just ignore my comments, I will give a review later on.
Why would he be embarrassed though ?
Eric8the4lost_:Yeah I'd be embarrassed too if I was you.
His fic.
Aguywithdioface:Why would he be embarrassed though ?
He was most probably referring to the OG.
Eric8the4lost_:His fic.
