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I have a idea put todo in the story like he was reborn in this world and was collecting information about this world and him and yuji just found each other by pure luck and now the both of them are working together to find the truth and it will be funny to see the both of them going around doing what they need to do and if you want a ship for todo. Haruhime is there and she needs a hero and for yuji there is riveria who is mature and the both of them will live for a very long time so he want die alone

I don't think your shameless because the story is pretty good and if you want a ship just make sure the girl is yuji's type and please put todo in the story somehow just for yuji to get more information about the world and what is happening and who is the bad guys

great story but it needs more chapters and please don't stop it have so much potential

was this for Otto or someone else

I agree with you and to be serious she could just try to be less self-righteous because she doesn't try to think if I dead what will happen to Otto but no she barely show any reaction and she doesn't over think about what she will do and to be serious if I was in Otto's place I will try to cut her off and find a less self sacrificing girl to marry

pretty much just that

when will you make chapter 2 of the fanfiction poor Otto the store is good please continue making new chapters

please make one more chapter of the fan fiction poor Otto

can you make a fan fiction of phainon in the world of arknights just because I want to see how will you make it

just focus on making more chaos while making Otto's rizz state finally start working and just pull the move of kiana gave Otto a one day of the week for him to leave but make it that Otto find himself in unexpected situations where help girls it their lowest and make Otto without realising flirt with them because he ends up Peking few bad habits from kiana and he have to explain to kiana why so many girls want him without starting a apocalyptic war between the so many girls and you can use some ggz characters like jyahnar two Spice things up and you have to make a good dynamic between the characters and Otto