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PragmaticoLv151yr
2023-05-05 06:37

So I read until around chapter 40 for reference. The writing quality is good and so is the update stability but it’s a new story so hope that keeps up. The MC has mega plot armor so far. There is some world building but it’s slowly getting added as the story progresses. We the readers also don’t get see or even hear about the development of the dungeon in detail especiall to how he earns DP daily for upkeep. He just shows back up and there are now what I presume to be steam engine and some form of power for electricity. He also got two legendary aides in a row. By chapter 20 I was convienes the DP numbers were just being made up as the author went with no real tracking. Wished it was a dungeon development story more than a harem but that’s my preference. Good luck to the author

I am a Problematic Dungeon Master

SeraphWedd
4.5
287 Chs

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SeraphWedd
SeraphWeddAuthor

Thank you for the honest review! There's a reason why there were no updates on his Daily DP, and that is: Notifications are only visible inside the Dungeon. The portable dungeon core can't show him updates. Another one is that, there's no electricity yet. The lamps are powered by latent mana in the air. The vehicles that were mentioned also aren't for practical use yet but prototypes of the dwarves' coal steam engine. Lilith only asked the dwarves to display it for more impact. Not only is it inefficient, it also lacks horsepower. Furthermore, they have no access to natural earth magnets yet, so they can't make an alternator for a generatior. The OP-ness of their team would be slowly reduced in the upcoming chapters, and the dungeon building would become more emphasized due to a certain future event. I hope this clarifies you doubts. Thank you for reading my work! 😁

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B0mbaCl0ck
B0mbaCl0ckLv15

Nerfing characters just to make it seem like MC has less plot armor is a quick way to ruin your own novel. Not that many complained about this fact, and chars don't have to go through mud to prove something. The 2 OP aides should be OP considering their status. You would need gods to defeat them, so adding random humans who are stronger just to give them a challenge is worse in my opinion.

SeraphWedd:Thank you for the honest review! There's a reason why there were no updates on his Daily DP, and that is: Notifications are only visible inside the Dungeon. The portable dungeon core can't show him updates. Another one is that, there's no electricity yet. The lamps are powered by latent mana in the air. The vehicles that were mentioned also aren't for practical use yet but prototypes of the dwarves' coal steam engine. Lilith only asked the dwarves to display it for more impact. Not only is it inefficient, it also lacks horsepower. Furthermore, they have no access to natural earth magnets yet, so they can't make an alternator for a generatior. The OP-ness of their team would be slowly reduced in the upcoming chapters, and the dungeon building would become more emphasized due to a certain future event. I hope this clarifies you doubts. Thank you for reading my work! 😁
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SeraphWedd
SeraphWeddAuthor

It wasn't really Nerfing them, but more like finding out their limits. That's why I said that their "OP-ness" reduces, and not their strength. 😎

B0mbaCl0ck:Nerfing characters just to make it seem like MC has less plot armor is a quick way to ruin your own novel. Not that many complained about this fact, and chars don't have to go through mud to prove something. The 2 OP aides should be OP considering their status. You would need gods to defeat them, so adding random humans who are stronger just to give them a challenge is worse in my opinion.
1yr
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