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Topanl4w
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2023-07-30 10:34

Right, hmm, i've read all the available free chapters.my understanding of the novel is not good enough for a review, so i'll just leave my impression of the novel.It's plain..., i was expecting some dungeon development type story (which might be there in later chapters) but all the available free chapters just focus on OP-ness and interaction.From the start, the story already introduced Quite possibly one of the strongest character as his Subordinate, from that moment on, everything that happen that doesn't make use of her ability would just be useless side stories considering the development of the dungeon is pretty much with her power and set of skills alone.so MC going around to Cities fighting unnecesary battles, taking unnecesary guests, experiences grieverance are just literally for characters' development, which bring me to point of thinking that this is a dungeon development type story.hahhhh... dissapointing start for me and that's my honest OPINION, no HATE.peace out.

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