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rawthenticLv141yr
2023-05-15 14:19

novel is not worth reading. i paid for a few chapter and read until ch 39, and i felt more and more of a regret on wasting money. the MC isused to fighting and killing (ultimately wants to kill 3 people), but freaks out when 3 wolves die due to his carlessness even. also he will let people walk all over him and insult him constantly but keeps letting them despite his power and them trying to kill him. example of this is he freaked out when a weak noble killed his pets but didnt kill him back. then when a paladin kept insulting him and trying to kill him, he just let him live. MC is supposed to be experienced middle aged man but acts like 14 year old when he sees women and complete pacisfist coward. its infuriating and ruins this novel.

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SeraphWedd
SeraphWeddAuthor

That's too bad... Everything you mentioned above is true as it is written under one assumption: "To not suddenly cause a war with another force" I don't know if this will make you want to continue reading, as Volume 2 is the climax where the dungeon needed to fight on multiple fronts. And, spoiler, the paladin he let go multiple times would die by his own Hands.

Corodix
CorodixLv15

Killing the Paladin at that point would have been far worse for him than letting the Paladin live. After all at that point in the story his goal was to establish relationships and trade with the humans. At that point in the story he spend quite some time as the guard of Sophia, so the chruch in question will easily associate him with Sopha if he does something against the paladins. She and her territory would take the brunt of the fallout if he had killed the Paladin at that point. His relationships with humans would quickly reach a dead end since the church would scheme against him and he would have nobody on his side to counter that and he could forget about establishing the trade as well. Overall I'm glad he has some thick skin and is smart enough to know that killing isn't always the right answer.

UnsterblichPlebb
UnsterblichPlebbLv4

bahahahahaha i mean what do u expect from a dog mc?

P_Young_4470
P_Young_4470Lv13

to not suddenly cause a war with another force is boring and makes the Mc into a dog of man which is just sad and author created all this the world the scenery mcs character and ways and decisions this is just bad choices stacked up on each other and why yall authors think we readers enjoy MCs like this just throttle me

SeraphWedd:That's too bad... Everything you mentioned above is true as it is written under one assumption: "To not suddenly cause a war with another force" I don't know if this will make you want to continue reading, as Volume 2 is the climax where the dungeon needed to fight on multiple fronts. And, spoiler, the paladin he let go multiple times would die by his own Hands.
TheSentience
TheSentienceLv14

So you’d rather he killed them then die?

P_Young_4470:to not suddenly cause a war with another force is boring and makes the Mc into a dog of man which is just sad and author created all this the world the scenery mcs character and ways and decisions this is just bad choices stacked up on each other and why yall authors think we readers enjoy MCs like this just throttle me
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hidingpanduh
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Yasss I am the tenth reviewer of this book haha congratulations to youuuu 🎉🎉🎉 Woah, this story is *chef’s kiss! I don’t usually read this genre and to me it’s really refreshing. I love the motive of revenge and survival for the main character. Ein means one in German too haha so that’s cool. I love the concept of limited human turned to dungeon master with lots of commanding power. I’ve read the first ten chapters. I really feel the tension starting to build between the potential attraction/love interest and Ein, I won’t point out who’s who until you all read for yourselves, but I recommend this book for lovers of dungeon game style books, with many different mythical creatures and inventive/descriptive scenes. For me, the worldbuilding so far I s wonderful, as a newbie regarding dungeon game things. I loved the details about the slime. The book’s writing pulled me in and made me want to read more and more, every new piece of information is like a delightful cookie that brings me more joy! Everyone should try reading this book, for the adventure and action, if not for the variety of characters and the revenge/survival motives of the characters. I bet there is more secrets to be revealed too with the wolves/elves etc. I look forward to seeing where this dungeon master life will lead Ein. My breath keeps going phewww every time he finds a new way to sustain his dungeon lol, otherwise Ein will be broke like me 😂😂😂 Keep writing and posting dear author, I will keep reading and supporting!

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