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I do give higher ones out if it fulfills the requirements judged by web novel. A lot of writers don’t take time to develope a character before adding more. They also skip details on world building or straight up contradict earlier statements in their story. System based stories forget key details on the stat page way to often. I’m ok with slow paced and even fast paced stories if the story flows. Grammar is also I big one for me especially if it messes up my flow when reading. Look for groups on discord to help fix grammatical errors I have been a part of some and some are free
First chapter is an English teachers worse nightmare.
How have you read it when it says not yet read lol
I understand taking it slow but free chapters are suppose to draw the audience in and emotional connections can help with this. Changing POVs so often did help me with this. Also the MCs power is generic just with the twist about sharing it with others. Great wise you just need to make sure you aren’t changing from 1st to 3rd person gotta stick with one
Should have done that way earlier
He don’t need this he won’t use it
Not possible he doesn’t even use all his stat points or other items to increase his stats
Did the fucktard use his stat points before entering? I’m sure we have stopped keeping up at this point on his stats but he also hasn’t used any more power stones
Read what was free. Story progressed at a steady pace with ok character development but with so many new people added so quickly it’s hard to flesh them all out personality wise and to gain any attachment to them. Grammar is ok but the story switch POV and also from 1st to 3rd person mid chapter is confusing. I don’t normally go for stories with so many other povs especially all the time like this story. The world building can be expanded on more especially geographically as they travel through the forest. The buildings and villages also aren’t fleshed out well. How many houses are there where are key features in relation to each other etc. MC is ok so far not a hero but not a villain just a normal guy so far. His ability isn’t very unique though but the sharing of abilities is a nice twist at least. Wish you luck