Well, it's very boring, it's basically a copy/pasta of the canon with an additional character posing as the mc. Once Vivi left Arabasta with the Straw Hats she lost any impact she had previously, every events still remains exactly the same and Vivi has barely 1 or 2 sentences per chapter, everything is so fast paced and emotionless that you can't begin to be interested in the characters or the actions the take. Don't waste your time on this fanfic, there's nothing interesting or thrilling to read here, it will just bore you to death.

I hope some people like it. I haven't yet seen a fic about Vivi so I wanted to write one. I know some people will complain that she is too weak. But, trust me, she will get powerful later on.

I'm not usually fastidious but this story is really boring. It's nothing but a copy-paste version of the canon, and Vivi got a Water water fruit, seriously?

got to chapter 80 or so, thriller bark arc. mc gets way too strong for no reason (she looks at the 6 martial arts from the CP0 and copies it in the next chapter just cuz) and basically just rolls through everyone they face. otherwise its basically a canon cope paste novel. overall its just boring more than anything. there always the inner monologue of the mc scheming so things dont change from canon, like she lets robin go with enis lobby even though she could have easily stopped it. at that point its not even a story, its just a robot that is trying to keep things on script.

It's not a bad one piece fic so far, though it's not the best. The fact that sticking to the plot throughout the journey of the straw hats, is honestly the only thing that makes it... I'm not sure what else to say than boring, I get it though, writing from the plot is easier and mixing and matching different actions that ends up having the same results won't make the story deviate from the main plot, but it robbed your story of actually having something fresh and appealing. That said, superb writing, a few small errors here and there but it's better than 90% of this platform.

Really good book I’ve never seen a vivi book before and honestly it’s incredible. Reading this book made my day thanks a bunch author!

I just don’t feel like this need 140+ chapters could easily be 50, other than that it’s just kinda boring

i like how vivi change from a princess that still has formality and manner, now in latest arc she losing some of that, well i think you can make her middle ground between nami and robin on how she act around the strawhat pirate good job! a good read! 👍

For a fanfiction, this is actually good. There are some things I disliked, but all in all, I would recommend giving it a try. Now, for things that may turn some off. First, the main points of the Strawhat's journey remain the same, but Vivi does have an impact. She starts off slow as she is weak, but in the later chapters she does change the way some conclusions are reached. As she is with the Strawhats, the conclusions will inevitably be the same as Canon. They always win in canon so they will here too. Something that I greatly dislike about this is Vivi's power. She presumes that it's Water logia, but it's so weak that it can only be a Water Paramecia.(Her body is water and she can control her body. That's it). Somehow I think and it's implied that there is more to her power but after 125 chapters we are still at the assumption that it's a water logia... Vivi also doesn't seem to train. She has some broken regeneration and she doesn't train her body...she only gets stronger by fighting.