For a fanfiction, this is actually good. There are some things I disliked, but all in all, I would recommend giving it a try. Now, for things that may turn some off. First, the main points of the Strawhat's journey remain the same, but Vivi does have an impact. She starts off slow as she is weak, but in the later chapters she does change the way some conclusions are reached. As she is with the Strawhats, the conclusions will inevitably be the same as Canon. They always win in canon so they will here too. Something that I greatly dislike about this is Vivi's power. She presumes that it's Water logia, but it's so weak that it can only be a Water Paramecia.(Her body is water and she can control her body. That's it). Somehow I think and it's implied that there is more to her power but after 125 chapters we are still at the assumption that it's a water logia... Vivi also doesn't seem to train. She has some broken regeneration and she doesn't train her body...she only gets stronger by fighting.
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