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The_GrindelwaldLv52yr
2023-03-04 20:06

Well, it's very boring, it's basically a copy/pasta of the canon with an additional character posing as the mc. Once Vivi left Arabasta with the Straw Hats she lost any impact she had previously, every events still remains exactly the same and Vivi has barely 1 or 2 sentences per chapter, everything is so fast paced and emotionless that you can't begin to be interested in the characters or the actions the take. Don't waste your time on this fanfic, there's nothing interesting or thrilling to read here, it will just bore you to death.

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SrMori
SrMoriLv13

There are quite significant changes to the story. Idk what you expect as she is a member of the strawhats? Obviously it's gonna follow the strawhats story !?

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Un fanfic es para cambiar la historia, si haces la misma historia con muy pequeños cambios es mejor no hacer nada

SrMori:There are quite significant changes to the story. Idk what you expect as she is a member of the strawhats? Obviously it's gonna follow the strawhats story !?
shillbear
shillbearLv14

story changed a lot now

TL_LitnChnotski
TL_LitnChnotskiLv4

I don't mean to be rude but you do know she said that in the summary right? 😭

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