The story is okay. In fact, this kind of space exploration and technological discovery is something I'd like to have more of. The most irritating problem of this story is the fact that the translator apparently doesn't know how to differentiate between a star system, a galaxy, a star cluster and the void between stars. These words are just thrown around arbitrarily without fitting the context. I've been told that in the raws the terminology is apparently used correctly, so the translator is at fault.
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