lbaro97

I have reached chapter 20 and unfortunately it has become bothersome to read this. Eloquence is great but this story is getting ridiculously difficult to read because it's so overblown. In addition, all sentences are starting to sound the same. Conversations are rare, and if they do happen, they are short, unnatural and in no way represantative of an actual conversation between normal people. Unfortunately, I reviewed this story too early...

I truly enjoy this story, right from the moment I first read the synopsis. As the author announced, AI is being used though in a way that I would call very high quality. When reading this story I get the feeling that the text is simply being enhanced by AI, not written from the ground up, and I must say, I like that. I like the setting. I like the plot so far. I like the tone. I like the chapter length (longer than usual). And I hope that this story will be continued for a very long time. Thank you, author.

Honestly, I'd recommend not focusing on chakra in this story. The MC sacrificed one of the paths to gain the necessary energy to have the Rinnegan function. It did not say that that energy is chakra. The Rinnegan on its own is already powerful an versatile. Adding chakra to that increases the scope of that to an almost limitless degree. And power without limits or constraints makes for boring stories. So, I recommend keeping his quirk within the constraints of the Rinnegan. No chakra as an extra.

You definitely won't be getting any Power Stones if the translation quality keeps fluctuating this badly every few chapters. Sorry.

Halfway through the chapter the translation quality dropped a lot. Like going from a professional translation to an unedited translation using google translator...

I still like the story but the translation quality is really deteriorating, unfortunately. It sounds high strung and overly complicated while also being structurally wrong. It really needs some editing.

Thanks for the chapter. Unfortunately the grammar and sentence structure in this chapter is not very good. Might be worth it to rewrite this one.

I can see this becoming a funny read. 😁 Looking forward to more

... very bed intentions... This has to be an intentional spelling error. 😂

A truly great story. I loved reading it and am looking forward to reading more from you. Thank you for writing this story. Thank you for deciding to be an author.