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JezzekielLv42yr
2023-02-18 10:53

Was looking forward to this, but am ultimately disappointed. The concept is good but the writing is amateurish. The way the author decided to present the MC is idiotic. It says he transmigrated into an AI, yet all his interactions are as if it’s a separate entity like a system. Sigh. I miss good sci-fi.

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pPOOR_GUYyLv4

what?, how could acting as a powerful lost civilization of AI that cannot be fooled be an idiotic thing when your trying to lay low and develop you, he is just a regular guy that has transmigrated into a galaxy full of mystery

pPOOR_GUYyLv4

bro sci Fi these days are really bad and now theres actually a good one like this your angry because you think the mc is a idiot by being cautious, it seems that the reason good sci-fi's like this doesn't appear often is because of you

pPOOR_GUYyLv4

I almost forgot the writing is good not the best but also not the baddest

JingFeng17Lv4

I wouldn't say good. It is average at best.

pPOOR_GUYy:bro sci Fi these days are really bad and now theres actually a good one like this your angry because you think the mc is a idiot by being cautious, it seems that the reason good sci-fi's like this doesn't appear often is because of you
JingFeng17Lv4

But it is readable.

JingFeng17:I wouldn't say good. It is average at best.
JingFeng17Lv4

It is true that he is just a regular guy but his intellect is that of a kid. He keeps bragging about his tech to others. The first interaction with the merchant civilization was so bad lol. He could have done some investigation before the interaction but no. He just decided to be ignorant and almost got harmed. And introducing cat girl in the early chapters almost threw me off.

pPOOR_GUYy:what?, how could acting as a powerful lost civilization of AI that cannot be fooled be an idiotic thing when your trying to lay low and develop you, he is just a regular guy that has transmigrated into a galaxy full of mystery
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