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Kw0z
Kw0zLv142yr
2023-05-04 13:24

MC is a loser, unfortunately. On several occasions he lets others control him. Actually, others control him most of the entire fanfic, if I’m being honest. I personally think it’s pretty pathetic.

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Crazy_Baller_259
Crazy_Baller_259Lv15

thank you

Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

thanks for the save

Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

something tells me u are overexaggerating

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Something tells me you’re dumb

Daoist4MxvaV:something tells me u are overexaggerating
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

well i am just making an observation , every other positive review said that they like how the mc willing to make friends , then i saw your review saying he allowed everyone to control. So a part of me assumed u were overexaggerating the fact that was further confirmed by the fact that u called me dumb even tho i didn't insult u. Tell me brother are u insecure person that's why your projecting

Kw0z:Something tells me you’re dumb
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Insulting someone doesn’t change the fact that that person is dumb. Thanks for further proving hoe dumb you are

Daoist4MxvaV:well i am just making an observation , every other positive review said that they like how the mc willing to make friends , then i saw your review saying he allowed everyone to control. So a part of me assumed u were overexaggerating the fact that was further confirmed by the fact that u called me dumb even tho i didn't insult u. Tell me brother are u insecure person that's why your projecting
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

bro are u projecting an insecurity on me or what

Kw0z:Insulting someone doesn’t change the fact that that person is dumb. Thanks for further proving hoe dumb you are
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Cringe. That’s not actually how insults work despite all of those bully movies you’ve watched, cornball

Daoist4MxvaV:bro are u projecting an insecurity on me or what
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

i am confused i am trying to have conversation like reasonable person and u are projecting all your insecurities and emotions on me , bro that's not healthy

Kw0z:Cringe. That’s not actually how insults work despite all of those bully movies you’ve watched, cornball
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Cringe yet again yuck. “You simply insult me based off of your insecurities. Heh…”

Daoist4MxvaV:i am confused i am trying to have conversation like reasonable person and u are projecting all your insecurities and emotions on me , bro that's not healthy
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

🤨🤨🤨🤨 like seriously bro that's the best u can do u just copied and pasted my original reply and typed the most generic insult on the Internet u lack any human creativity . BRO U ARE LITERALLY AN NPC!!!!!

Kw0z:Cringe yet again yuck. “You simply insult me based off of your insecurities. Heh…”
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E2DWYER
E2DWYERLv4

give up bro u took an L

Kw0z:Cringe yet again yuck. “You simply insult me based off of your insecurities. Heh…”
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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I don’t take L’s

E2DWYER:give up bro u took an L
unknown_00001
unknown_00001Lv3

I agree with you but it's because I hate the harem tag with all my being

unknown_00001
unknown_00001Lv3

Stupid isn't really an insult, yes, but it's not the kind of extreme insult, and what's more, if someone calls you stupid doesn't mean they feel insecure and all that stuff and he really wanted to insult you he would have called you an idiot and not stupid.... as for the fact that he exaggerates his first I don't agree, because my majority who put 5☆ like the harem, then there is the difference of point of view because it depends on the way in which the mc approached the characters and also the character of the mc also if he is too pouty and naive we would certainly think that he is being manipulated by other

Kw0z:Insulting someone doesn’t change the fact that that person is dumb. Thanks for further proving hoe dumb you are
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

You’re slow. You think if someone is told they’re stupid their entire life they won’t slowly start to believe it?

unknown_00001:Stupid isn't really an insult, yes, but it's not the kind of extreme insult, and what's more, if someone calls you stupid doesn't mean they feel insecure and all that stuff and he really wanted to insult you he would have called you an idiot and not stupid.... as for the fact that he exaggerates his first I don't agree, because my majority who put 5☆ like the harem, then there is the difference of point of view because it depends on the way in which the mc approached the characters and also the character of the mc also if he is too pouty and naive we would certainly think that he is being manipulated by other
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

your fanfics are really bad damn man

Kw0z:You’re slow. You think if someone is told they’re stupid their entire life they won’t slowly start to believe it?
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I can see that you didn’t read my fanfic, moron lmao

JRCaste:your fanfics are really bad damn man
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

I skimmed it and it was bad, thank god you stopped writing

Kw0z:I can see that you didn’t read my fanfic, moron lmao
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I can see what chapter you got to, idiot lmao. Says N/A. Little tip, say the truth in an argument and only sprinkle in lies if you’re losing, don’t just babble a full on lie, pathetic little man lmao

JRCaste:I skimmed it and it was bad, thank god you stopped writing
Other Reviews
DaoistNSjWUY
DaoistNSjWUYLv1

What else can you say, it’s another Einlion story. This would usually mean an unbearably frustrating MC that seems to appear in most of Ein’s stories. To my surprise, at least as of chapter 39, the protagonist hasn’t made me want to gouge my eyes out unlike the other MC’s Ein has created. The MC who has now been reincarnated? into the world of MHA as Izuku is someone who carries himself with confidence, is obviously more mature; leading to some tasteful flirting with the girls inhabiting the MHA world, and isn’t described as being on the verge of breaking down because of his own overthinking. Doesn’t mean a part of me doesn’t think the latter is inevitable since Einlion loves that for their MC’s. I’d absolutely love to be proven wrong though. As of chapter 38, it seems like this is heading towards a harem. This is good in my opinion, since the girls that have been introduced so far have been given very pleasant personalities and it would be a shame for them to have less “screen time” just to keep it realistic. On that note, there’s something that happened early on in the story between Izuku and Inko that I wish Einlion had at least attempted to follow through with. I wish to hold even a minuscule amount of hope that Einlion won’t take the easy way out and just pawn Inko off to All Might, but I’ve sadly read EPIC, and Mushoku Impact so the hope for a more interesting storyline between the two is all but guaranteed to be dead. (Please, just give me something new, I’ve been disappointed too many times at this point). TLDR: This is the only one of Einlion’s stories that I have been looking forward to enough to check for updates multiple times a day. After reading chapter 39 I lost a lot of that enthusiasm, so I’m just kind of sad right now.

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