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The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv42yr
2023-04-08 01:54

The only good thing is the writing, everything else is meaningless. Well, I couldn't read it after fifteen chapters. I don't recommend it, but it's up to you. Read the first ten chapters at least.

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AwfulAbsoluteSweet
AwfulAbsoluteSweetLv4

The writing is good but the dialogue is AWFUL, super disappointing for an Einlion ff

SteepWorld2
SteepWorld2Lv4

I should have listened, 14 chapters and they all were just disappointing and cringy af.

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DaoistNSjWUY
DaoistNSjWUYLv1

What else can you say, it’s another Einlion story. This would usually mean an unbearably frustrating MC that seems to appear in most of Ein’s stories. To my surprise, at least as of chapter 39, the protagonist hasn’t made me want to gouge my eyes out unlike the other MC’s Ein has created. The MC who has now been reincarnated? into the world of MHA as Izuku is someone who carries himself with confidence, is obviously more mature; leading to some tasteful flirting with the girls inhabiting the MHA world, and isn’t described as being on the verge of breaking down because of his own overthinking. Doesn’t mean a part of me doesn’t think the latter is inevitable since Einlion loves that for their MC’s. I’d absolutely love to be proven wrong though. As of chapter 38, it seems like this is heading towards a harem. This is good in my opinion, since the girls that have been introduced so far have been given very pleasant personalities and it would be a shame for them to have less “screen time” just to keep it realistic. On that note, there’s something that happened early on in the story between Izuku and Inko that I wish Einlion had at least attempted to follow through with. I wish to hold even a minuscule amount of hope that Einlion won’t take the easy way out and just pawn Inko off to All Might, but I’ve sadly read EPIC, and Mushoku Impact so the hope for a more interesting storyline between the two is all but guaranteed to be dead. (Please, just give me something new, I’ve been disappointed too many times at this point). TLDR: This is the only one of Einlion’s stories that I have been looking forward to enough to check for updates multiple times a day. After reading chapter 39 I lost a lot of that enthusiasm, so I’m just kind of sad right now.

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