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pEmKaySLv111yr
2023-10-25 20:15

I don't often write negative reviews. It's even rarer that I respond to negative reviews from others. After all, it's all pretty subjective. But it seems that this time I needed to trust the opinions of other readers. The quality of this author's writing is pretty good, you can't take that away from him. It's a pretty good story if the author would have been more confident. The author seems to be undecided about what he wants out of this story. And the plot changed depending on the readers reaction or the author's mood. This completely disregarded the actions of the characters in the novel or the previous plot. It just changed too drastically. The characters' relationships, the characters' goals, the characters' backstories, the main character's morals, etc. I stopped reading at chapter 67. I don't want to spoiler anything, but the so-called unwarranted "authorial interference" was at its peak there(I guess). As a tip, I can say that the author needs to be more confident in himself and his ideas. If you change YOUR story based on the opinions of others, nothing good will come of it. Good luck.

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PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

Keep reading the story keeps getting better, and goes beyond the plot of Bnha

Einlion
EinlionAuthor

I write stories my readers want to read, so when the people who actually support my novel express their opinions, I don't just tell them to f**k off. This isn't a self-insert intended to pander to my personal wants and interests xD

EarthlyNatureLover
EarthlyNatureLoverLv14

really tho?

Einlion:I write stories my readers want to read, so when the people who actually support my novel express their opinions, I don't just tell them to f**k off. This isn't a self-insert intended to pander to my personal wants and interests xD
senkii
senkiiLv6

he do writing another story before, but i can't finish it cause I have something to do and Chapter Add until i feel wonder if i should read it😅...anyway , I don't know what he/she doing .. or make experiment for other good fanfiction hopefully so...

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DaoistNSjWUY
DaoistNSjWUYLv1

What else can you say, it’s another Einlion story. This would usually mean an unbearably frustrating MC that seems to appear in most of Ein’s stories. To my surprise, at least as of chapter 39, the protagonist hasn’t made me want to gouge my eyes out unlike the other MC’s Ein has created. The MC who has now been reincarnated? into the world of MHA as Izuku is someone who carries himself with confidence, is obviously more mature; leading to some tasteful flirting with the girls inhabiting the MHA world, and isn’t described as being on the verge of breaking down because of his own overthinking. Doesn’t mean a part of me doesn’t think the latter is inevitable since Einlion loves that for their MC’s. I’d absolutely love to be proven wrong though. As of chapter 38, it seems like this is heading towards a harem. This is good in my opinion, since the girls that have been introduced so far have been given very pleasant personalities and it would be a shame for them to have less “screen time” just to keep it realistic. On that note, there’s something that happened early on in the story between Izuku and Inko that I wish Einlion had at least attempted to follow through with. I wish to hold even a minuscule amount of hope that Einlion won’t take the easy way out and just pawn Inko off to All Might, but I’ve sadly read EPIC, and Mushoku Impact so the hope for a more interesting storyline between the two is all but guaranteed to be dead. (Please, just give me something new, I’ve been disappointed too many times at this point). TLDR: This is the only one of Einlion’s stories that I have been looking forward to enough to check for updates multiple times a day. After reading chapter 39 I lost a lot of that enthusiasm, so I’m just kind of sad right now.

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