I don't often write negative reviews. It's even rarer that I respond to negative reviews from others. After all, it's all pretty subjective. But it seems that this time I needed to trust the opinions of other readers. The quality of this author's writing is pretty good, you can't take that away from him. It's a pretty good story if the author would have been more confident. The author seems to be undecided about what he wants out of this story. And the plot changed depending on the readers reaction or the author's mood. This completely disregarded the actions of the characters in the novel or the previous plot. It just changed too drastically. The characters' relationships, the characters' goals, the characters' backstories, the main character's morals, etc. I stopped reading at chapter 67. I don't want to spoiler anything, but the so-called unwarranted "authorial interference" was at its peak there(I guess). As a tip, I can say that the author needs to be more confident in himself and his ideas. If you change YOUR story based on the opinions of others, nothing good will come of it. Good luck.
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