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MrKingCraft
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2023-04-20 11:06

I'm just writing this review to spill my thoughts. bro, I thought my eyes stopped working when I saw no harem tag but there was harem. I don't know what's the hold up but, (I'm trying to say this in the nicest way possible), you're honestly just wasting people's time. A simple fix would be a tag. Please for future readers add a tag and for my current annoyance please, stop leading people on with a no harem tag when there is harem I don't say this very much or openly but I have a blatant hatred of harem thus this fanfic disappointed me greatly. You may continue writing in peace. Honestly the story wasn't bad before the harem so I'll give you that but, please, just add the tag. I'm going to bed now. I wasted a good bit of time reading this and now it's late and I'm tired. Also add the tag. Peace

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Ryofu
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This is the reason why, before reading any novel, I ask about it when there is no info about #Harem or #NoHarem within the tag, the synopsis or an author review.

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What else can you say, it’s another Einlion story. This would usually mean an unbearably frustrating MC that seems to appear in most of Ein’s stories. To my surprise, at least as of chapter 39, the protagonist hasn’t made me want to gouge my eyes out unlike the other MC’s Ein has created. The MC who has now been reincarnated? into the world of MHA as Izuku is someone who carries himself with confidence, is obviously more mature; leading to some tasteful flirting with the girls inhabiting the MHA world, and isn’t described as being on the verge of breaking down because of his own overthinking. Doesn’t mean a part of me doesn’t think the latter is inevitable since Einlion loves that for their MC’s. I’d absolutely love to be proven wrong though. As of chapter 38, it seems like this is heading towards a harem. This is good in my opinion, since the girls that have been introduced so far have been given very pleasant personalities and it would be a shame for them to have less “screen time” just to keep it realistic. On that note, there’s something that happened early on in the story between Izuku and Inko that I wish Einlion had at least attempted to follow through with. I wish to hold even a minuscule amount of hope that Einlion won’t take the easy way out and just pawn Inko off to All Might, but I’ve sadly read EPIC, and Mushoku Impact so the hope for a more interesting storyline between the two is all but guaranteed to be dead. (Please, just give me something new, I’ve been disappointed too many times at this point). TLDR: This is the only one of Einlion’s stories that I have been looking forward to enough to check for updates multiple times a day. After reading chapter 39 I lost a lot of that enthusiasm, so I’m just kind of sad right now.

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