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ApollocusLv132yr
2023-03-04 14:53

Really well written and compared to a lot of other MMORPG type novels this one is probably 100x better that them. Whether it be writing quality, story development, character design, and world background this novel is way superior.

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GalanarAuthor

Thank you very much 😊

gamabunda4873Lv5

is he so stiff in his path that life stops mattering orrr will he deal with things like romance ....

Galanar:Thank you very much 😊
GalanarAuthor

This story is definitely multifaceted. So there will be more things he will deal with, like romance among other things.

gamabunda4873:is he so stiff in his path that life stops mattering orrr will he deal with things like romance ....
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RapidmovimentLv11

Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.

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