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Believer_X
Believer_XLv32yr
2022-12-27 01:27

Don't know where to start from. So I'll start from anywhere. 1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading. So good job author 2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up. 3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first. 4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author. 5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.

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Henry_macharia
Henry_machariaLv3

Is this a harem? Is the MC the Wimpy Hero type? Does the MC's reasons make sense?

SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

haven't read it yet but knowing the author and the other rewires the response are No, No, Yes

Henry_macharia:Is this a harem? Is the MC the Wimpy Hero type? Does the MC's reasons make sense?
Henry_macharia
Henry_machariaLv3

Thank you

SnowApathie:haven't read it yet but knowing the author and the other rewires the response are No, No, Yes
Florian_Leitner_8293
Florian_Leitner_8293Lv4

is it a story where the game becomes reality because of the apocalypse tag?

DarknessKnight
DarknessKnightLv14

I read oraund 200 chapters and from what I read it isn't harem but romance

Henry_macharia:Is this a harem? Is the MC the Wimpy Hero type? Does the MC's reasons make sense?
ammonium_chloride
ammonium_chlorideLv3

Yeah, but it’s more of a slow transitioning 250ch in and there are no invaders on earth till now, just starting to see the first signs that the world is changing

Florian_Leitner_8293:is it a story where the game becomes reality because of the apocalypse tag?
Iwantcharacterdev
IwantcharacterdevLv14

Hope I’m not bothering you but since you know the authors other works. Does the author leave the mc alone or is there romance at some point and if so is it only at end of story

SnowApathie:haven't read it yet but knowing the author and the other rewires the response are No, No, Yes
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

sorry Idk, I don't know the author's works I just read things on the writers discord server. I think there will be romance but probably not too soon, but this is only my belief nothing to concretely believe.

Iwantcharacterdev:Hope I’m not bothering you but since you know the authors other works. Does the author leave the mc alone or is there romance at some point and if so is it only at end of story
Iwantcharacterdev
IwantcharacterdevLv14

Thank you for taking the time to reply and for the information!

James_6547
James_6547Lv1

I like her but I don't know what to tell her

Josh_Mendoz
Josh_MendozLv13

Hes 25? Mc feels like an emotional teen also sucks that after awhile he’s constantly with someone. And now he has a gf so the chances of him going solo r even lower. Well these r just some personal dislikes but seriously hes 25?

RealityBender
RealityBenderLv4

There's no romance tag though

Florian_Leitner_8293:is it a story where the game becomes reality because of the apocalypse tag?
black_romeo
black_romeoLv2

It sucks that he's not alone? Why would that suck? That sounds like good thing.

Josh_Mendoz:Hes 25? Mc feels like an emotional teen also sucks that after awhile he’s constantly with someone. And now he has a gf so the chances of him going solo r even lower. Well these r just some personal dislikes but seriously hes 25?
Quietquil
QuietquilLv15

I would like to say that I have a 40yr old coworker who acts more like an emotional teen.. maybe they could schlep into this book with the mc.. I have not read this book yet. I just know people like that. lol

Josh_Mendoz:Hes 25? Mc feels like an emotional teen also sucks that after awhile he’s constantly with someone. And now he has a gf so the chances of him going solo r even lower. Well these r just some personal dislikes but seriously hes 25?
Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

I'd like a pic of the MC in his avatar/meld!

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing too bad

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

wth is a rewire? did you mean rewrite?

SnowApathie:haven't read it yet but knowing the author and the other rewires the response are No, No, Yes
Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

maybe because the romance isn't pivotal to the story?

RealityBender:There's no romance tag though
Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

it should still be added.. as many readers hate or like the romance tac.. and end up bombarding the author again and again to ask if there is romance in the story.. i know this because i am one of them!... romance might not be the center of the story, but!.. romance is a very tricky and a very big thing to chose to put in a story.. its often ether a hit or miss.. and can both let you lose readers or gain readers...

Lucinda_Hacker:maybe because the romance isn't pivotal to the story?
_KaNETO
_KaNETOLv3

I am planning to read this but I don't want to read a story which turns out to be good but the author has dropped the novel so can you tell me it is on hiatus or dropped from the last comment of the author he/she said that they want to continue from last Friday but it still not updated.

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Rapidmoviment
RapidmovimentLv11

Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.

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