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Tyson_1102
Tyson_1102Lv142yr
2023-05-10 04:16

This review is at chapter 70~ (minor spoilers) Honestly, this novel is pretty good and I suggest giving it a read, but it most definitely isn't for everyone. All the bases of a good novel are hit like a good power system, interesting concept, lots of things to be discovered, etc.) The more glaring issue, and honestly why some people will drop this novel, is the MC. To put is plainly, the MC is more or less an idiot consistently. For some reason, the author makes him 25 years old when his actions are more in line with someone who is around 16. He constantly craves validation yet acts like a man child several times. To top it off, in a tournament, for reasons purely chalked up to plot contrivance, doesn't kill two of his enemies. The author excuses this by saying he isn't focused on killing but exploring and seeing new things. That doesn't make any sense because...you know... he is literally in a pvp tournament and used to be top 1% in a pvp centered game. I will keep reading because I hope, maybe naively, that the MC won't stay a complete idiot for long and the rest of the novel is pretty cool.

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Galanar
GalanarAuthor

I appreciate your honesty. Although I do not agree with your point of view, your opinion is your own :)

Tyson_1102
Tyson_1102Lv14

Update at chapter ~150: The attitude of the MC as well as the vibe of the novel got much better and I 100% recommend it.

AmonRe
AmonReLv15

thanks I was thinking dropping this novel exactly for the same reason. I guess I will jump the begining, I hope the story is more coherent..

SIDUZ
SIDUZLv4

I hope its true , i am at chapter 80 where he owe a favour to 4 people for some dumb reasons and he thought mana breathing + body cleansing to clear the favour and in return he got a bunch of diee wolf soul cores...it was the most idiotic deal in the whole novel universe by a 25 yr old

Tyson_1102:Update at chapter ~150: The attitude of the MC as well as the vibe of the novel got much better and I 100% recommend it.
Lykon
LykonLv15

I think that was a really good deal those cores made him alot stronger and all he had to do was teach them a technique which cost him nothing to do

SIDUZ:I hope its true , i am at chapter 80 where he owe a favour to 4 people for some dumb reasons and he thought mana breathing + body cleansing to clear the favour and in return he got a bunch of diee wolf soul cores...it was the most idiotic deal in the whole novel universe by a 25 yr old
Dqrk
DqrkLv3

yea but those techniques are really powerful and didn't ask his teacher before sharing them it could of been family secret technique and just threw it out there to a person he barely knows the whole deal was incredible stupid and dumb i mean he already gave away all his soul cores then he still owns them a favour which could be anything basically like give me your gold i nees a sword and he wouldnt be able to decline because the only limits on the contract were that it must not cost him is life

Lykon:I think that was a really good deal those cores made him alot stronger and all he had to do was teach them a technique which cost him nothing to do
JustSomeDude00
JustSomeDude00Lv4

i second this

Dqrk:yea but those techniques are really powerful and didn't ask his teacher before sharing them it could of been family secret technique and just threw it out there to a person he barely knows the whole deal was incredible stupid and dumb i mean he already gave away all his soul cores then he still owns them a favour which could be anything basically like give me your gold i nees a sword and he wouldnt be able to decline because the only limits on the contract were that it must not cost him is life
Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

Agree!

Lykon:I think that was a really good deal those cores made him alot stronger and all he had to do was teach them a technique which cost him nothing to do
Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

I see your point.

Dqrk:yea but those techniques are really powerful and didn't ask his teacher before sharing them it could of been family secret technique and just threw it out there to a person he barely knows the whole deal was incredible stupid and dumb i mean he already gave away all his soul cores then he still owns them a favour which could be anything basically like give me your gold i nees a sword and he wouldnt be able to decline because the only limits on the contract were that it must not cost him is life
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RapidmovimentLv11

Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.

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