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Zetsway
ZetswayLv122yr
2022-11-19 04:10

First of all, I think this deserves a warning. The MC makes stupid choices. If endless frustration at missed opportunities is not your cup of tea, this may be a miss for you.(I have that enough in my real life, no need to relive it in fanfiction). Second, It's been 5 chapters and I still can't place where and when the MC transmigrated. It's not the start of MCU, as the Avengers are already a thing, but Captain Marvel is also with them and Tony is still alive...I kind of lost interest when I found myself floating between Marvel timelines and plots so...yeah...pass.

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Imbreak
ImbreakAuthor

bruh did you even read the notes in chapter 1? 🤣🤣

Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

Yes, I've read team. How do they make my review invalid?

Imbreak:bruh did you even read the notes in chapter 1? 🤣🤣
Imbreak
ImbreakAuthor

i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅

Zetsway:Yes, I've read team. How do they make my review invalid?
Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

I was under the impression that it had at least some of the MCU plot, but it seems like the MCU plotline(the Thanos one) was already over and there were no hero deaths. I simply felt lost as to where and when the novel is placed. For me, choosing a fandom with multiple timeline and universes means that you must guide the reader to understand what to expect(at least that's what fanfiction means to me)

Imbreak:i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
Imbreak
ImbreakAuthor

oh the thanos arc isnt over. its timeline is placed right before the capt america winter soldier arc which will have some changes. i just didnt want to copy paste the mcu as it is so I had some heroes appear in advance

Zetsway:I was under the impression that it had at least some of the MCU plot, but it seems like the MCU plotline(the Thanos one) was already over and there were no hero deaths. I simply felt lost as to where and when the novel is placed. For me, choosing a fandom with multiple timeline and universes means that you must guide the reader to understand what to expect(at least that's what fanfiction means to me)
Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

ok, you are right, some changes are cool. I just felt like the MCU plot was over because I saw Captain Marvel in the cast, and most of the MCU(including pre glove Thanos) is weaker then her. I didn't think you'd use her this early.

Imbreak:oh the thanos arc isnt over. its timeline is placed right before the capt america winter soldier arc which will have some changes. i just didnt want to copy paste the mcu as it is so I had some heroes appear in advance
Champion_collector
Champion_collectorLv13

Junior pays respect

Follower_of_Christ
Follower_of_ChristLv13

its the time line there is no reference and no explanation which confuses give people a time line a date and so on

Imbreak:i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

you are 100% correct.

Paksss
PaksssLv3

man, im envious of this book views.

Calvin_Ochieng_7514
Calvin_Ochieng_7514Lv3

the author should stop justifying his stupid writing

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Calvin_Ochieng_7514:the author should stop justifying his stupid writing
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Policeman of all the occupation is to be policemanso he like someone to be his boss

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MarinXGrayfia
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a true comment

Twilight_of_d_gods
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hmm 🤔 this senior will guide you

Champion_collector:Junior pays respect
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