Review Detail of Zetsway in Ultimate Marvel System
Review detail
First of all, I think this deserves a warning. The MC makes stupid choices. If endless frustration at missed opportunities is not your cup of tea, this may be a miss for you.(I have that enough in my real life, no need to relive it in fanfiction). Second, It's been 5 chapters and I still can't place where and when the MC transmigrated. It's not the start of MCU, as the Avengers are already a thing, but Captain Marvel is also with them and Tony is still alive...I kind of lost interest when I found myself floating between Marvel timelines and plots so...yeah...pass.
Ultimate Marvel System
Imbreak
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i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
Zetsway:Yes, I've read team. How do they make my review invalid?
I was under the impression that it had at least some of the MCU plot, but it seems like the MCU plotline(the Thanos one) was already over and there were no hero deaths. I simply felt lost as to where and when the novel is placed. For me, choosing a fandom with multiple timeline and universes means that you must guide the reader to understand what to expect(at least that's what fanfiction means to me)
Imbreak:i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
oh the thanos arc isnt over. its timeline is placed right before the capt america winter soldier arc which will have some changes. i just didnt want to copy paste the mcu as it is so I had some heroes appear in advance
Zetsway:I was under the impression that it had at least some of the MCU plot, but it seems like the MCU plotline(the Thanos one) was already over and there were no hero deaths. I simply felt lost as to where and when the novel is placed. For me, choosing a fandom with multiple timeline and universes means that you must guide the reader to understand what to expect(at least that's what fanfiction means to me)
ok, you are right, some changes are cool. I just felt like the MCU plot was over because I saw Captain Marvel in the cast, and most of the MCU(including pre glove Thanos) is weaker then her. I didn't think you'd use her this early.
Imbreak:oh the thanos arc isnt over. its timeline is placed right before the capt america winter soldier arc which will have some changes. i just didnt want to copy paste the mcu as it is so I had some heroes appear in advance
its the time line there is no reference and no explanation which confuses give people a time line a date and so on
Imbreak:i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
