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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv42yr
2022-12-06 13:01

I skimmed the first few chapters or so hoping the MC would choose villain for once, or at least be a morally grey hero. Well, the author exceeding in disappointing me even more than he would’ve making a cliche ”hero” MC. The MC requests to be a policeman forfeiting the rewards of either the hero or villain path in his stupidity. Assuming we don’t get a new MC a few chapters in I know I will feel absolutely sick watching such an idealistic and naive moron somehow get carried through the dangerous world of marvel by his system.

Ultimate Marvel System

Imbreak
3.7
131 Chs

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ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

cliche hero? brother man there are more anti-heros than anything on webnovel, if anything a morally gray mc is more cliche.

1yr
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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Morally gray isn’t cliche it is reality.

ObamaUchiha:cliche hero? brother man there are more anti-heros than anything on webnovel, if anything a morally gray mc is more cliche.
1yr
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ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

CruelReality:Morally gray isn’t cliche it is reality.
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1yr
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asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1

Lol, what's wrong with being a good person?

1yr
31
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

I would rather read a villain, but I do not mind a well written hero. This MC was neither and made the moronic choice of trying to be a policeman throwing away system rewards.

asdasdssf: Lol, what's wrong with being a good person?
1yr
38
JonathanJM
JonathanJMLv3

En casi todos los fanfiction el MC es villano, Casi no hay MC buenos en los fanfiction.

1yr
7
Abayomi_Atoyegbe
Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv14

There really needs to be an update for a dislike button on review comments so I don't waste my time on on some dumb comment (you know who you are, the ones that think they smart).

1yr
11
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

? Why not just comment explaining why you think a review is “dumb”?

Abayomi_Atoyegbe:There really needs to be an update for a dislike button on review comments so I don't waste my time on on some dumb comment (you know who you are, the ones that think they smart).
1yr
8
Abayomi_Atoyegbe
Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv14

because when I do that I usually end up writing a decent amount of text and sometimes I'm just not bothered to.

CruelReality:? Why not just comment explaining why you think a review is “dumb”?
1yr
8
Blockshot
BlockshotLv15

I’m not really sure what you mean by “for once” since at least in my experience on this app, there’s quite an abundance of villainous, or anti hero MC’s

1yr
21
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2

See Spiderman all life you'll know what's wrong Savin some random people over your friends lovers and family

asdasdssf: Lol, what's wrong with being a good person?
6mth
2
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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

First of all, I think this deserves a warning. The MC makes stupid choices. If endless frustration at missed opportunities is not your cup of tea, this may be a miss for you.(I have that enough in my real life, no need to relive it in fanfiction). Second, It's been 5 chapters and I still can't place where and when the MC transmigrated. It's not the start of MCU, as the Avengers are already a thing, but Captain Marvel is also with them and Tony is still alive...I kind of lost interest when I found myself floating between Marvel timelines and plots so...yeah...pass.

2yr

HypnosGodofSleep
HypnosGodofSleepLv14

Bruh, this should be a tutorial on how not to write fan fiction. This book has plot holes larger than the one in your heart when your dad left you.

1yr
Omkar_More_3591
Omkar_More_3591Lv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
masterreader02
masterreader02Lv13

the reader should know this before reading the story, the mc is one of those mc that have everything handed to him, the woman, or atleast the first i read are the typical that they would fall for the mc because he is breathing in an certain way, for example the balck widow in this fanfic is literally an out of character balck widow, she doesnt act a like a super spy or even assasin, heck she act like high school confused teenager and sleep with the mc just because. knowthing more nothing less also the choices the mc makes are childish and stupid at the very least, he is a fortysomenting year old guy that wakes up in the body of 25 years old guy and act like kid in his 12

2yr
SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11

Reveal spoiler

1yr
mao_zi
mao_ziLv4

imagine being given a second chance at life then you waste it as a cop in world which is already more corrupt then ours . yeah i don't have enough brain cells to waste on this

1yr
MiRai
MiRaiLv5

Hmm, thanks to LewdPaper, Grid, and others who keep pestering Break to write another fanfic in discord server... We finally success to make Imbreak to upload another fanfic after 2 years has passed...

2yr
hazy_wolf
hazy_wolfLv4

The excuse I made the MC stupid because I wanted him to be stupid is only thing the author could say for creating this. The MC literally said I don't if this body is a virgin so I have to act like a virgin but he's not a virgin. If this first deter you from this story you are a more open-minded person than me and I salute you.

1yr
Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv2

Reveal spoiler

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