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Zetsway
ZetswayLv122yr
2022-11-19 04:10

First of all, I think this deserves a warning. The MC makes stupid choices. If endless frustration at missed opportunities is not your cup of tea, this may be a miss for you.(I have that enough in my real life, no need to relive it in fanfiction). Second, It's been 5 chapters and I still can't place where and when the MC transmigrated. It's not the start of MCU, as the Avengers are already a thing, but Captain Marvel is also with them and Tony is still alive...I kind of lost interest when I found myself floating between Marvel timelines and plots so...yeah...pass.

Ultimate Marvel System

Imbreak
3.7
137 Chs

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Imbreak
ImbreakAuthor

bruh did you even read the notes in chapter 1? 🤣🤣

2yr
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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

Yes, I've read team. How do they make my review invalid?

Imbreak:bruh did you even read the notes in chapter 1? 🤣🤣
2yr
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Imbreak
ImbreakAuthor

i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅

Zetsway:Yes, I've read team. How do they make my review invalid?
2yr
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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

I was under the impression that it had at least some of the MCU plot, but it seems like the MCU plotline(the Thanos one) was already over and there were no hero deaths. I simply felt lost as to where and when the novel is placed. For me, choosing a fandom with multiple timeline and universes means that you must guide the reader to understand what to expect(at least that's what fanfiction means to me)

Imbreak:i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
2yr
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Imbreak
ImbreakAuthor

oh the thanos arc isnt over. its timeline is placed right before the capt america winter soldier arc which will have some changes. i just didnt want to copy paste the mcu as it is so I had some heroes appear in advance

Zetsway:I was under the impression that it had at least some of the MCU plot, but it seems like the MCU plotline(the Thanos one) was already over and there were no hero deaths. I simply felt lost as to where and when the novel is placed. For me, choosing a fandom with multiple timeline and universes means that you must guide the reader to understand what to expect(at least that's what fanfiction means to me)
2yr
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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

ok, you are right, some changes are cool. I just felt like the MCU plot was over because I saw Captain Marvel in the cast, and most of the MCU(including pre glove Thanos) is weaker then her. I didn't think you'd use her this early.

Imbreak:oh the thanos arc isnt over. its timeline is placed right before the capt america winter soldier arc which will have some changes. i just didnt want to copy paste the mcu as it is so I had some heroes appear in advance
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Champion_collector
Champion_collectorLv14

Junior pays respect

2yr
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Follower_of_Christ
Follower_of_ChristLv13

its the time line there is no reference and no explanation which confuses give people a time line a date and so on

Imbreak:i didnt say it was invalid. i thought I already conveyed there that this isnt a pure mcu plotline so I thought those who continued to read it is fine with that 😅
2yr
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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

you are 100% correct.

2yr
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Paksss
PaksssLv3

man, im envious of this book views.

2yr
Calvin_Ochieng_7514
Calvin_Ochieng_7514Lv4

the author should stop justifying his stupid writing

1yr
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Daoistivfx9l
Daoistivfx9lLv4

Calvin_Ochieng_7514:the author should stop justifying his stupid writing
1yr
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The_Petty_Knight
The_Petty_KnightLv12

Daoistivfx9l:
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1yr
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Nightmare_deity
Nightmare_deityLv4

Policeman of all the occupation is to be policemanso he like someone to be his boss

1yr
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Daoistivfx9l
Daoistivfx9lLv4

The_Petty_Knight:
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MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

a true comment

1yr
Twilight_of_d_gods
Twilight_of_d_godsLv14

hmm 🤔 this senior will guide you

Champion_collector:Junior pays respect
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Hmm, thanks to LewdPaper, Grid, and others who keep pestering Break to write another fanfic in discord server... We finally success to make Imbreak to upload another fanfic after 2 years has passed...

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The excuse I made the MC stupid because I wanted him to be stupid is only thing the author could say for creating this. The MC literally said I don't if this body is a virgin so I have to act like a virgin but he's not a virgin. If this first deter you from this story you are a more open-minded person than me and I salute you.

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