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DaddyAuthor2yr
2022-11-05 06:52

Nothing to see here. Just your average author giving himself 5 stars. Just something to know: This was the first fic I ever wrote. I think it has some good and bad parts, but overall, I'm happy with it. I hope you enjoy reading it!

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OscuroSignore
OscuroSignoreLv1

I agree with it not being an Issei hate fic, and I'm also happy you aren't doing a Rias hating one. Also, you should beware of making MC too powerful from the start. I read the chapter of those essences and it's frankly broken! The one that give him the Emperor's bloodline alone would already be enough to turn him into a total op monster, let alone the others. I think it would be better going by levels, like he had to work for improving the strength of his essences like the binding one (like, he has to grind for loyalty like in sim games). After all the ROBs want to be entertained, so wouldn't it be more reasonable if the make it so that he has to work at least one bit for those god-level powers?

xxdante
xxdanteLv12

well i think level would be irrelevant bc he has the essence of the blank but proficiency or sum. also i agree this could be become a really good story. Keep improving the first five chapters have been better than most other on the app💀

OscuroSignore:I agree with it not being an Issei hate fic, and I'm also happy you aren't doing a Rias hating one. Also, you should beware of making MC too powerful from the start. I read the chapter of those essences and it's frankly broken! The one that give him the Emperor's bloodline alone would already be enough to turn him into a total op monster, let alone the others. I think it would be better going by levels, like he had to work for improving the strength of his essences like the binding one (like, he has to grind for loyalty like in sim games). After all the ROBs want to be entertained, so wouldn't it be more reasonable if the make it so that he has to work at least one bit for those god-level powers?
214dnde
214dndeLv4

I want sum issei bashing

BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Who are the harem members?

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I honestly disagree with the ending of your synopsis, many people hate Issei simply because of his deplorable attitude, I don't know if you support that kind of attitude, but disapproving of people who despise it is something... 😬😬😬😬😬 red flag for you

Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

Thought this was a Worm fic cause of the name Taylor

ShiroNirvana
ShiroNirvanaLv1

Author, I want to know if the story will contain NTR (NETORARE), if so please let me know, I don't want to read that kind of thing. Google Translator

Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv14

no tiene ntr, hasta el momento.

ShiroNirvana:Author, I want to know if the story will contain NTR (NETORARE), if so please let me know, I don't want to read that kind of thing. Google Translator
Daoist9imsrT
Daoist9imsrTLv1

Es un asco tu historia, eres op pero un esclavo que horror de las peores historias de dxd que e visto

MacKenzie_50943
MacKenzie_50943Lv14

update ?

JohnnyK
JohnnyKLv4

Next Chapter Please

Overlord378
Overlord378Lv4

For the Issei thing, it can basically be boiled down to "do you want to turn him into a girl, or take their sacred gear (which may or may not involve, or cause his death)." Both have their advantages, taking/killing him to take it equals "you have a sacred gear that you can either give to one of your subordinates, or use yourself." And the Turning him into a girl one... I'll let her image speak for her.

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10

The image works better when you don’t know what it’s supposed to represent…

Overlord378:For the Issei thing, it can basically be boiled down to "do you want to turn him into a girl, or take their sacred gear (which may or may not involve, or cause his death)." Both have their advantages, taking/killing him to take it equals "you have a sacred gear that you can either give to one of your subordinates, or use yourself." And the Turning him into a girl one... I'll let her image speak for her.
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