Readtilltheybleed

The MC/author is irritating. How do they even know who you are? Now your MC telling everybody who he is and what he can do? Why!? You know exactly who the bad guy is, you know who is coming after you, why are you playing these games? Is your power a one off? Are you unable to copy other weapons? What about gear and turbo? What about the firearms of the criminals?

I thought he was going to copy the talent of gear in Turbo… but he’s not even copying weapons from the gangs. What was his ability again?

That doesn’t make sense. The combat positions and the results are all over the place.

You saved my life, how dare you? 🤦🏻‍♂️ to repay kindness with evil.👿 When he wanted to learn how to make magic potions, he learned how to inspect plants to discover their qualities through their energy. Shouldn’t this technique make it possible to distinguish edible plants? 🌱

No parting words of wisdom or prophecy? No letter hidden for after he leaves… no general outline or guide to aid them?

Bracers with arrows inside? How long are his forearms? Why not make it shoot darts or needles? Rather than imbuing them with magic, you can tip them with poison… it’s logical and efficient.

Looking for my retort… oh, here it is.

Makes me wonder where that finger has been.

Can’t magneto control missiles? I remember him controlling a large quantity of missiles mid flight during the climax of the X-Men first class movie. Then there’s professor X who can control anyone on the planet and prevent them from firing the missiles. Jean who can deflect them even if they are made of plastic. Wolverine who survived a nuke. And who knows how many other mutants have effective powers…

30 or so versions of this book are available on this site…