Interesting but frustating read. The premise and the has a lot of potential but way the Author made the system has become a dragging problem. The system is too simple in it's rules "take anything you get in a videogame that isn't strictly *alive* and bring it to the real world (you can't use things like mods or cheats/creative/sandbox mode)". Because this system is made without limitations like restriction levels or such, it's so OP that anyone could speedrun from 0 to being a god in a day. The the author knows this is a problem so he did the things that most frustated me while reading this FF: Selectively making the MC beyond stupid, and butchering any decent pace this novel could have gotten. This combined to the blatant self-insert and wish-fulfilling nature of the story makes me sometimes don't know if I'm getting frustated at the MC or at the author. I will stick at least until the Author shows the paranormal world background he's foreshadowed, as it may reignite the interesting spark that this FF started with. Thank you for your time.
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So what do u suggest the MC should do? I m curious
I don't think the core problem lays in the MC's doings. For example, up to where I've readen the MC acts on his whims, where he could use his power a bunch of times in a couple of days, then relax/do nothing for weeks. Or use them for pointless ways for the story, then go on liberating North Korea. I'm not arguing if the MC has personal reasons to justify doing this, as whims are very much human; I'm arguing that it disturbs the pace of the story, as if changing the genre from adventure to slice of life too sudenly. And the thing I see as the core problem is the System, because it's so OP that you nerf the MC when searching for solutions for problems that arise (one week of videogame research would make him unbeatable in anything like money, technology, strength, magic, etc.). Maybe having limited the System and given it some limitations for times it can be used, Item strenght or magic power... would have given you, the Author, a more tangible hold for the story pace.
Mc not main problem at all but still annoying. For me mc just ambitiousless vegetable. What his goal? He's chaotic and basically going with flow. Like why he hunt crimes when he can summon million of godly power android and finish this work in a day. Or why he even try to go official route when he can summon dozen orbital cannons, shot to unpopulated region and take rule over world. Only overwhelming power can stop greed and nukes proof it by making most peaceful period in our history. If he don't want to rule himself he always can share his work. He also don't act like human. No one standing before heap of cheats will shuffle weakest one when they can take mightiest if both have same backlash (none for mc). /// As guy above said. Main problem is cheat. He can become god in first day and only plot stop him. It's frustrating. We already have "i have super usb drive" where happens exactly you do but about movies and this novel progress (mc and world) never stops because cheat have limits. I have nothing against op cheats but there is funny op and boring op. You made second one. If you will rewrite it, i can suggest some restriction: extraction needs energy of device (based on weight or size of target) and magical energy of user (based on complexity or degree of world's rule breaking) in the same time + user can't extract charged powersourse.
What are u asking for is coming slowly. Its just a wait of few chapters but i understand if people don't have the patience. Nor do I expect them to wait. I am letting the MC take things slowly because he doesn't want to ruler and just let humanity bloom by itself
No, it doesn't. I'm asking reason to stay so low when he has no restriction to rocketing up. Who care want or not he become ruler or smth when he can get power of gods in first day but doesn't do it. It's not human like behavior. If he want slow life he should want to get power of gods even more and reach goal in one go because nothing can interrupt slow life of god. If he really want to humanity bloom itself he should just make some black markets with super hight tech stuff and teleportation delivery and let humanity do whatever they want based on stuff he sell and he shouldn't sell anything to produce stuff like his. But he jump into medical industry and show his fase but not open his secret berries (how humanity will bloom when he store everything in pocket)? Almost 70 chapters he does nothing without good reason. It's not slowly, it's stay in one point.
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I agree if people have choice to have godly power or stay ordinally 99% going for godly power without doubt 1% is beyond stupid even you don't want to use that power at least you can protect yourself and when people have that power the confident will be +1000% that make people become great confident is everything lack of that is trash
