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Ashton_ALv121yr
2023-08-06 01:38

Honestly, way better than I expected. I can see this novel becoming a top 50 novel in the future if it keeps its pace. Even when I first read Shadow Slave, it only had around 20 chapters and now it's consistently in first and I think this novel has the potential. While it's not completely original, no system novel is, however, this roleplay system seems very unique to me and an interesting take on the genre. I also often am surprised at the authors choices and in fact proud that she or he can avoid common tropes and mistakes. I am looking forward to this novel growing. It has potential, don't ruin it author or drop it. I will hunt you down.

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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv12

to be fair, I'm not saying it has the potential to be the next shadow slave, i just found similarities. I can see this being top 100 maybe 50, if it improved a bit and had more chapters. It's pretty new so it needs readers who enjoy it.

solo_gamers
solo_gamersLv1

I agree with you although the atmosphere of this novel seems more overgeared, the SS is geared towards the dark theme and sometimes in other people's perspectives the mc is recognized, already overgeared and softer, with the mc being stronger for his level as in this novel the MC is highlighted not for being strong but for having that strength without mana.

Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv12

yea that's true but a lot worse has been in top 50 and this one's acceptable, most of the flaws in plot can be argued as well

solo_gamers:I agree with you although the atmosphere of this novel seems more overgeared, the SS is geared towards the dark theme and sometimes in other people's perspectives the mc is recognized, already overgeared and softer, with the mc being stronger for his level as in this novel the MC is highlighted not for being strong but for having that strength without mana.
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